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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love taking picture when I'm traveling and then I will share with my friend and post it on the website. I can share the view to many people.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Well between the two style of picture, I love rural areas because I spend my most of my time in the urban. In the city it is very common if I take the picture of the urban area.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer to other countries will because in my in my country I didn't like. I don't like take the picture of it because I didn't find the new things. When I travel to other city I prefer the strange.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法更准确,并适当扩展细节但不冗长。注意动词单复数(picture → pictures),时态和冠词;使用一两句支持细节并用连接词使表达流畅。例如先给主题句,再简要说明原因和方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures when I travel. I usually take photos of landscapes and local scenes, then share the best ones with friends and post them online so more people can see the places I visit.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 结构需更清晰,先直接回答偏好,然后用具体原因支持。注意语法(styles, I spend most of my time in urban areas / cities)并使用连接词(because, so)增强逻辑。避免含糊表达。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I spend most of my time in the city and want a change of scenery. For example, I like photographing fields and quiet villages since they feel more peaceful and unique compared to familiar city scenes.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法正确。避免重复(in my in my),使用准确表达(prefer views in other countries),并提供具体理由和例子。可以用连接词(because, when)组织句子。尽量控制在3–4句内。

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they often offer unfamiliar scenes and new cultural details. For instance, I enjoy capturing colorful markets or historic buildings abroad, which feel more interesting than the places I see every day at home.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I love taking picture when I'm traveling and then I will share with my friend and post it on the website.

I love taking pictures when I'm traveling, and then I will share them with my friends and post them on a website.

句中“taking picture”应为复数“taking pictures”,因为说话人表示习惯性地拍多张照片;“share with my friend”应为“share them with my friends”,需要代词指代前面的“pictures”并使用复数“friends”;“post it on the website”也需要用复数代词“them”并且通常说“on a website”或“on the website”视情况,此处改为更自然的“on a website”。建议:拍照等可数名词用复数,代词要与先行词数一致,连词前后加逗号使句子更清晰。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I can share the view to many people.

I can share the views with many people.

原句中“the view”用法不当,语境指泛指多处景色,应使用复数“views”;动词搭配应为“share something with somebody”而不是“share ... to ...”。建议:使用正确的介词搭配(share ... with ...),并根据语境选择单数或复数。

Singular and plural issue

× Well between the two style of picture, I love rural areas because I spend my most of my time in the urban.

Well, between the two styles of pictures, I prefer rural areas because I spend most of my time in the city.

“two style of picture”应为“two styles of pictures”或更自然地“两种类型”,属于单复数错误;“I spend my most of my time”冗余且顺序不当,应为“I spend most of my time”;“in the urban”不自然,应改为“in the city”。建议:注意名词复数形式与固定搭配,避免不必要的所有格或限定词。

Third person singular issue

× In the city it is very common if I take the picture of the urban area.

In the city it is very common for me to take pictures of urban areas.

句中“take the picture”更自然的说法为不定式结构“for me to take pictures”来表达习惯性动作;“picture”应为复数“pictures”且“urban area”也应使用复数“urban areas”以匹配泛指;原句结构不够自然,使用“it is common for someone to do something”更恰当。建议:用固定结构表达普遍情况(it is common for ... to ...),注意主语与动词形式一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer to other countries will because in my in my country I didn't like.

I prefer other countries because I don't like my own country.

原句中“prefer to other countries will”语序和搭配都错误,动词“prefer”后可直接跟名词或动名词(prefer A to B或prefer doing),此处应直接说“prefer other countries”;“in my in my country I didn't like”重复且时态不当,应为现在时“I don't like my own country”来表达一般喜好。建议:使用正确的prefer搭配,避免重复并选择合适时态表达持续的喜好。

Verb + -ing form

× I don't like take the picture of it because I didn't find the new things.

I don't like taking pictures of it because I don't find anything new.

“don't like”后应接动名词形式“taking”而不是不带-ing的动词;“the picture of it”可改为“pictures of it”;“didn't find the new things”时态前后不一致,描述一般情况用现在时“don't find anything new”。建议:掌握“like + -ing”结构,保持句内时态一致,使用不定指代词如“anything”更自然。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× When I travel to other city I prefer the strange.

When I travel to other cities, I prefer strange or unfamiliar places.

“other city”应为复数“other cities”以表泛指;“I prefer the strange”结构不完整且“the strange”用法不当,应明确说明喜欢“strange”什么,这里指“strange or unfamiliar places”。建议:注意名词复数和补全句子中被修饰对象,使表达具体清楚。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
StrangeUnusual; Weird; Unfamiliar; Ill at ease
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