Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and correct small grammar errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct phrasing: remove duplicate words (“the the”, “of of”) and use a clearer reason phrase (“because”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially nature and animals. For example, when I travel I usually choose mountainous areas because they offer dramatic scenery and abundant wildlife, so I can take both photos and videos.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and pluralize nouns correctly. Start with a topic sentence, then add a specific detail or comparison using a linking word like “because” or “as”.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because they feel modern and visually interesting. For instance, city skylines with towering skyscrapers and innovative architectural designs catch my eye more than rural scenes.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, use correct word forms and avoid redundancy. Provide one clear reason with specific examples and connect ideas with linking words such as “for example” or “also.” Replace incorrect phrases (“very variety”, “grass plants”, “the hundreds of views”) with natural expressions.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in China because the scenery is very diverse. For example, there are long coastlines, high mountain ranges, and expansive grasslands, so you can experience many different landscapes without traveling far.

× Yes, I like taking pictures especially the the view of of nature and animals.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures, especially the views of nature and animals.

The sentence has duplicated words ('the the', 'of of') and an article issue: 'the view of nature and animals' is too specific; 'views of nature and animals' is more natural. Remove duplicates and use plural 'views' to match general preference. Add a comma after 'pictures' for clarity.

× When I go outside for traveling I will choose mountains be because I can take a video and pictures.

✓ When I travel, I choose mountains because I can take videos and pictures.

The original mixes future 'will choose' with habitual meaning. Use present simple 'choose' for habitual preference. 'Go outside for traveling' is awkward; 'When I travel' is natural. Remove extraneous 'be' and make 'videos' plural to match 'pictures'.

× I prefer the views in urban area because it's very modern and I can see different types of towers and some high technology buildings.

✓ I prefer the views in urban areas because they're very modern and I can see different types of towers and some high-technology buildings.

Use plural 'urban areas' to match 'views'. Use 'they're' to agree with plural noun 'views' or refer to 'urban areas'. 'High-technology' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before 'buildings'. Also 'types of towers' is fine; keep plural agreement.

× I prefer the view in China because I think the view in China is very variety.

✓ I prefer the views in China because I think the scenery in China is very varied.

'The view in China' is too specific; 'views' or 'scenery' is more natural. 'Very variety' is incorrect word choice and form; use adjective 'varied' to describe 'scenery'. Avoid repeating 'the view in China' twice; rephrase for concision.

× We have oceans, we have mountains and we have grass plants everywhere.

✓ We have oceans, mountains, and grasslands everywhere.

'Grass plants' is unnatural; 'grasslands' or 'meadows' is appropriate. Combine items in a single phrase for fluency and remove repetitive 'we have' if desired.

× We have the hundreds of views in China and you can view the different kinds of it everywhere in China.

✓ We have hundreds of different views in China, and you can see them everywhere.

Use 'hundreds of' without 'the'. 'Different kinds of it' is unclear; replace with 'different views' and use pronoun 'them' to refer back. 'See' is more natural than 'view' here. Keep sentence concise and grammatically correct.