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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like to take pictures when I say some beautiful views, especially when I try when I travel on bus or on train.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I definitely love rural countries views because I'm a I'm a citizen of live from the rural rural side so I love their forests and.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Actually, I didn't, uh, have been to another country, uh, but so I just have, uh, traveled all around mine, all around my state. So I absolutely prefer my country's view, uh, and especially uh, after I travel.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁且直接回应问题。注意语法(如动词搭配和时态),避免重复或多余词语,最多控制在5句内。可以以主题句开始(直接回答喜欢与否),然后用一两句具体说明拍摄场景并用连接词衔接。比如说明在哪些情况下拍和为什么这样拍。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like snapping pictures when I travel by bus or train because the scenery changes rapidly. For example, I often capture mountains or rivers passing by, which helps me remember the journey.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答需更有条理并避免重复。先直接表达偏好,然后给出具体且相关的理由,使用连接词(because, so, for example)。注意词汇选择(说“rural countryside”或“the countryside”而不是重复‘rural’),并补充完整句子和细节(如喜欢森林、田野、安静等)。控制在最多5句。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I grew up in the countryside. The quiet fields and dense forests feel peaceful and closer to nature. For example, I love watching sunrise over rice paddies and listening to birds in the morning.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅并减少犹豫词(uh, um)。先直接回应(更喜欢本国或外国),然后说明原因并给具体例子。可以说明尚未出国的事实,但用更简洁的句子表达并补充旅行经历带来的喜好原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad yet. I have explored many regions of my state and I enjoy the familiar landscapes and local culture. For instance, after visiting different provinces, I now appreciate the variety of scenery at home.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I like to take pictures when I say some beautiful views, especially when I try when I travel on bus or on train.

Yes, I like to take pictures of beautiful views, especially when I travel by bus or by train.

句中出现不恰当的动词搭配和介词用法:"take pictures when I say some beautiful views" 不自然且错误,应该用固定搭配 "take pictures of ..." 表示拍摄某物。"try when I travel" 多余并造成句子混乱,应删除。交通工具用介词应为 "by bus/ by train" 而不是 "on bus/ on train"。改正建议:使用固定短语 "take pictures of",删除多余的动词,使用正确介词 "by"。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I definitely love rural countries views because I'm a I'm a citizen of live from the rural rural side so I love their forests and.

I definitely love rural country views because I live in the countryside, so I love its forests.

原句中形容词和名词搭配错误:"rural countries views" 不符合英语名词构成,应该为 "rural country views" 或更自然的 "views of the countryside"。此外,句中重复并错误地使用了 "I'm a I'm a citizen of live from the rural rural side",结构混乱,时态和表达应改为简单现在时 "I live in the countryside"。最后句尾缺少宾语或完成结构,改为 "so I love its forests" 更完整。改进建议:简化句子,用恰当名词短语和简单现在时描述居住地。

Past tense issue

× Actually, I didn't, uh, have been to another country, uh, but so I just have, uh, traveled all around mine, all around my state.

Actually, I have never been to another country, but I have traveled all around my state.

句子中时态混用和否定表达错误:"I didn't have been" 是错误的过去式和完成时混用。正确的否定完成时表达应为 "I have never been"(至今未去过)。后半句 "I just have traveled" 语序可以更自然地放为 "I have traveled",并用 "all around my state" 表示在本州周游。改进建议:使用现在完成时描述到过的经历,用 "have never been" 表示至今没去过。

Present tense issue

× So I absolutely prefer my country's view, uh, and especially uh, after I travel.

So I absolutely prefer the views in my country, especially after I travel.

句中名词数和定冠词使用不当:"my country's view" 听起来像只有一个观点或景色,用复数 "views" 更符合语境且需用定冠词 "the views in my country" 来指代该国的风景。另外短语 "after I travel" 位置更自然置于句尾但需与句意匹配,保持一般现在时表达偏好。改进建议:使用复数形式 "views" 并使用合适的冠词和介词短语 "in my country"。

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