Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and natural by starting with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., 'moment' and 'time'). Also correct small grammar and collocation errors like 'so much memories' → 'so many memories' or 'many memories'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit the seaside I always photograph the sunset because looking at the picture later brings back the peaceful feelings I had at that moment.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one clear reason and a short example. Use correct singular/plural forms and natural collocations (e.g., 'more greenery', 'fresh air'). Avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because there is more greenery and the air feels fresher. For instance, I like walking in the countryside where wide fields and trees make the scenery very relaxing.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, then give a concise reason and one brief contrasting point about other countries. Avoid filler sounds like 'Huh' and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' for clarity.

Ví dụ: At the moment I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and give me a sense of peace. However, I am open to visiting other countries in the future to compare their landscapes with what I already know.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views for safekeeping and whenever I see that picture it reminds me of the moment or of the time when I was there and it brings back so much memories.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views for safekeeping, and whenever I see a picture it reminds me of the moment or the time when I was there and it brings back so many memories.

Errors: 'that picture' -> 'a picture' for natural reference; 'so much memories' -> 'so many memories' because 'memories' is countable and requires 'many' not 'much'. Also added a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'many' with plural countable nouns and choose article 'a' for a non-specific single picture.

× I prefer the views in rural rural areas as it is more greens, you can see more greens and it has a nice and fresh air.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is more green scenery; you can see more greenery and the air is nice and fresh.

Errors: 'rural rural areas' repeated word; 'it is more greens' incorrect number and noun form—'green' as an uncountable adjective/noun or 'greenery' is appropriate; 'you can see more greens' should be 'you can see more greenery'; 'it has a nice and fresh air' incorrect pronoun and article—use 'the air is nice and fresh' or 'the air is nice and fresh there'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use uncountable nouns correctly (greenery), and match pronouns/articles to refer to 'air'.

× As of now, I prefer the views in my own country because I've already seen it and it brings me peace.

✓ At the moment, I prefer the views in my own country because I have already seen them and they bring me peace.

Errors: 'As of now' is acceptable but 'At the moment' is more natural; 'I've already seen it' uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'views' (plural), so use 'them'; 'it brings me peace' should be 'they bring me peace' to agree with plural 'views'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number (singular/plural) matches the noun it replaces.

× And As for other countries, I would like to see it for myself first before I make a comparison. Huh.

✓ As for other countries, I would like to see them for myself first before I make a comparison.

Errors: Leading 'And' and capitalized 'As' after 'And' make sentence informal and disfluent; 'see it' uses singular pronoun for plural 'countries'—should be 'see them'; extraneous filler 'Huh' is informal and unnecessary in a test. Suggestion: remove 'And' and filler words, match pronouns to nouns, keep formal tone in responses.