Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 표현의 정확성을 개선하세요. 현재 문장에서 동사 형태와 관사 사용이 틀렸고, 문장이 어색합니다. 답변은 간단한 주제문 + 한두 문장의 구체적 이유로 2~3문장으로 구성하세요. 예를 들어 현재는 'give' 대신 'gives' 또는 더 자연스러운 표현인 'inspires me'를 쓰고, 'a new special idea'처럼 모호한 표현을 구체적으로 바꿔야 합니다. 그리고 연결어(for example, because, so 등)를 사용해 이유를 자연스럽게 이어주세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Taking photos inspires me and helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss. For example, when I photograph a skyline or a park, I pay attention to colours and shapes, which gives me new ideas for my artwork.

Gợi ý: 문법(주어-동사 일치)과 문장 연결을 개선하세요. 'My preferred views is'는 틀렸고 불필요한 반복과 말더듬(umm)이 있습니다. 짧은 주제문으로 시작한 뒤, 이유를 연결어로 자연스럽게 덧붙이고 구체적 묘사를 포함하세요. 예를 들어 'I prefer urban views because of bright lights and architectural details'처럼 간결하고 정확한 표현을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the bright lights and striking architecture. For instance, city streets at night look lively with neon signs and illuminated skyscrapers, which I find very attractive.

Gợi ý: 중복 표현과 어색한 단어 선택을 피하고 문장 구조를 단순화하세요. 'really shining and beautiful' 같은 반복은 줄이고, 'higher building' 대신 'tall buildings'와 같은 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 감정 표현도 'makes me really exciting'는 틀리므로 'excited'로 고치고, 예시를 더 구체적으로 연결어(for example, such as)를 사용해 한 문장으로 정리하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because I live in a city with many illuminated streets. For example, tall buildings and neon signs create a lively atmosphere that makes me feel excited when I walk around at night.

× Yes, I like it because it give me a new special idea.

✓ Yes, I like it because it gives me a new, special idea.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'it' is third person singular so the verb needs an -s in present simple ('gives'). Also add a comma between 'new' and 'special' to separate adjectives and make the phrase sound natural. Suggestion: remember to add -s for he/she/it in present simple and to punctuate adjective lists correctly.

× My preferred views is in urban areas because I like shining things so umm I like cities.

✓ My preferred views are in urban areas because I like shiny things, so I like cities.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'views' is plural, so use the plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Also 'shining things' is awkward; 'shiny things' (adjective) is more natural. Add a comma before 'so' and remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and choose appropriate adjective forms.

× Light and gorgeous view.

✓ Light and gorgeous views.

Incorrect use of nouns and articles/prepositions: the original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and uses singular 'view' inconsistently after plural context. Making it 'Light and gorgeous views' matches previous plural topic and corrects the fragment into a noun phrase that fits the context. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches and avoid sentence fragments; combine with the previous sentence if needed.

× I like my own country's view, uh, because I live in city, so it's really shining and beautiful.

✓ I like my own country's views, because I live in the city, so they're really bright and beautiful.

Subject-verb agreement and article errors: 'view' should be plural to match general meaning ('views'). 'I live in city' needs the definite article 'the' before 'city'. 'It's' refers to singular; use 'they're' to agree with plural 'views'. Also 'shining' as an adjective is awkward; 'bright' is more idiomatic. Suggestion: use articles with common nouns (the city) and keep subject and verb number consistent.

× It has really shining and beautiful views.

✓ It has really bright and beautiful views.

Sentence structure and word choice: 'really shining' is not idiomatic; 'bright' or 'well-lit' works better. Also 'it' is vague here; if referring to the city, 'the city has' is clearer. Suggestion: choose natural adjective collocations and ensure the subject is clear.

× For example, neon sign or higher building.

✓ For example, neon signs or tall buildings.

Comparative/superlative and number errors: 'neon sign' and 'higher building' are incorrect forms. Use plural 'neon signs' and the adjective 'tall' rather than the comparative 'higher' unless comparing two items. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× It makes me really exciting.

✓ It makes me really excited.

Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and verb phrase construction: 'exciting' describes something that causes excitement; to express personal feeling use the adjective 'excited'. 'It makes me excited' is the correct pattern. Suggestion: distinguish between 'excited' (feeling) and 'exciting' (causing the feeling).