Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, avoid unclear words and repetitions, and give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct vocabulary (e.g., “scenery” or “views,” not “youth”). Keep to 2–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture unique scenery and moments. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset and quiet countryside fields in the morning, which helps me notice details I would otherwise miss.

Gợi ý: Answer directly in one sentence stating your preference, then give a clear reason with a concrete detail. Avoid vague or irrelevant phrases (e.g., “get more money”). Use linking words like because or because of to connect ideas and keep sentences complete.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy of busy streets and the variety of architecture. For example, I like photographing tall buildings, colorful markets, and street murals that show city life.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence stating your choice, then expand with two specific reasons and an example. Use correct collocations (e.g., “in other countries” or “abroad”), plural/singular forms correctly, and avoid fragmented sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, so, for instance).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultures. For instance, when I visited the United States, I photographed varied scenery from city streets to national parks, and I enjoyed talking with local people to learn about their traditions.

× Yeah, of course I really like taking pictures of different youth because that makes me beautiful in different views, uh, looks different L different of me and it makes me conf confidence more.

✓ Yes, of course. I really like taking pictures of different places and scenes because they make me look better from different angles and they increase my confidence.

Issues: incorrect noun 'youth' (word choice) and awkward sentence structure. This falls under sentence structure errors and incorrect use of adjectives/nouns. Replace 'youth' with 'places' or 'scenes' to match context. Use clear subject-verb agreement ('they make me look'), and choose natural phrases ('look better from different angles', 'increase my confidence'). Suggestion: simplify clauses, use correct nouns, and ensure verbs agree with plural subjects.'

× Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas? I prefer. Urban areas because that makes me feel get more money and makes me.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they make me feel I can earn more money and they suit me better.

Issues: fragment 'I prefer.' and unclear phrase 'that makes me feel get more money and makes me.' This is a sentence structure error and subject-verb agreement. Combine into one sentence, use plural subject 'they' to match 'urban areas', and use an infinitive to express ability ('I can earn more money'). Suggestion: avoid fragments and complete thoughts, match pronouns to plural nouns, and use clear verbs.'

× I prefer views other countries because I love America, because there are a lot of different views and different sceneries. I didn't see that and I can see a lot of different culture, different peoples and I can talk with.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I love America; there are many different sights and landscapes I have not seen, and I can experience many different cultures and meet different people to talk with.

Issues: missing preposition 'in' before 'other countries', incorrect plural forms ('sceneries' uncommon, 'peoples' misused), and tense/incomplete clause 'I didn't see that'. This involves incorrect use of prepositions, plural nouns, and sentence structure. Use 'in other countries', 'sights' or 'landscapes' instead of 'sceneries', 'cultures' and 'people' (not 'peoples' unless referring to ethnic groups), and correct tense 'I have not seen'. Suggestion: add necessary prepositions, use standard plural nouns, and complete clauses for clarity.'