Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and fluency: correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and give one specific supporting detail or example. Aim for 2–4 concise sentences and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos from different angles because each angle reveals unique details. For example, a building photographed from above shows its roof patterns, while a street-level shot captures people and activity, so I often shoot the same scene from several perspectives to tell a fuller story.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure, tense, and completion of ideas. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Correct past-tense forms and avoid unfinished sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a village and they remind me of my childhood. For instance, photographing rice fields at sunrise brings back memories of family mornings, and the quiet atmosphere makes it easier to focus on composition.

Gợi ý: Clarify phrasing and avoid filler words. State your preference clearly, give a specific reason and an example, and use linking words to connect ideas. Replace vague phrases like 'I can easily wonder' with precise descriptions of curiosity or interest.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I have already visited many regions at home and want new perspectives. For example, traveling abroad lets me capture architectural styles and cultural scenes I haven't seen before, which constantly inspires my photography.

× I prefer to taking pictures from different views because of several reasons.

✓ I prefer taking pictures from different views for several reasons.

After 'prefer' when it expresses general preference, use the base verb or verb+ing (prefer taking), not 'to' + gerund. Also 'because of several reasons' is unnatural; use 'for several reasons'.

× First of all, you can see different parts of this point when you take different dimension of these pictures.

✓ First of all, you can see different parts of a scene when you take pictures from different angles.

'Different dimension of these pictures' is incorrect phrasing. Use 'different angles' or 'different perspectives'. 'This point' is unclear; 'a scene' fits photo context. 'When you take' is fine but revise noun phrases for clarity.

× It's also beneficial to find little differences when you take.

✓ It's also beneficial because you can find small differences when you take photos.

Sentence ends with incomplete clause 'when you take.' Add the object 'photos' and improve wording: 'little differences' -> 'small differences'. Also clarify cause-effect with 'because you can'.

× Well I prefer rural areas.

✓ Well, I prefer rural areas.

Add comma after introductory 'Well'. The sentence is otherwise correct in present tense expressing preference.

× I'm a boy who is coming from rural areas.

✓ I'm a boy who comes from a rural area.

Use simple present 'comes' for a permanent fact rather than 'is coming'. Also use 'a rural area' or 'the countryside' rather than plural 'rural areas' in this construction.

× I born in village.

✓ I was born in a village.

Use passive past 'was born' to indicate birthplace. Include article 'a' before 'village'.

× When I take pictures from the rural areas I can feel from my childhood.

✓ When I take pictures in the countryside I can recall my childhood feelings.

Use 'in' for taking pictures in a place, not 'from'. 'Rural areas' -> 'the countryside' is more natural. 'Feel from my childhood' is incorrect; use 'recall my childhood' or 'feel nostalgic'.

× So it's emotional than the urban areas.

✓ So it's more emotional than urban areas.

Comparative form requires 'more' before adjective: 'more emotional'. Also remove 'the' before 'urban areas' for parallel structure or say 'the urban areas' if specifying.

× Also in the rural areas you can easily.

✓ Also in the countryside you can take photos more easily.

Original sentence is incomplete ('you can easily' what?). Complete thought: 'you can take photos more easily' or 'access subjects more easily'. Specify the action and improve phrasing.

× I prefer in other countries than my country because, uh, at my age I saw many states in my country.

✓ I prefer taking photos in other countries rather than in my country because I have seen many places here at my age.

After 'prefer' include verb phrase 'taking photos' and use 'rather than' for comparison. 'Saw many states' is awkward; use 'have seen many places' and present perfect 'have seen' to relate to current experience.

× So if I have chance to take photos of the other countries, I can easily wonder and I can see other things than the normal things.

✓ So if I have the chance to take photos in other countries, I will be amazed and I can see things that are different from the usual.

Use 'the chance' and 'in other countries'. 'I can easily wonder' is incorrect; 'I will be amazed' or 'I will feel wonder' is better. 'Other things than the normal things' -> 'things different from the usual' for clarity and natural phrasing. Match future possibility with 'will' if hypothetical.

× Uh, it's fascinating to find.

✓ It's fascinating to discover new things.

Original ends abruptly 'to find' with no object. Complete the phrase: 'to discover new things' or 'to find new perspectives' to convey meaning.