Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), and give one short reason or example. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and limit to max 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually photograph places I visit to remember them, and I keep the photos on my phone. For example, I often take shots of sunsets or interesting buildings when I travel.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, then offer 1–2 specific, linked reasons using correct grammar and linking words (because, and, for example). Reduce repetition and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “make me close”).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because the countryside has cleaner air and peaceful landscapes. For example, I enjoy walking through fields and listening to birds, which helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid vague claims like “my country is the best.” Provide specific reasons and one brief example; remove fillers and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, and, for example). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has cool weather, fresh air, and many mountains. For example, I often visit nearby mountain trails to take photos of the scenery and the clear skies.

× Yes, I like taking picture uh, of different views where I go to, I want to umm, keep it in my uh uh, in my phone and I can.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of the different views I go to; I want to keep them on my phone.

Original uses singular 'picture' while meaning multiple photos and repeats filler words. Change to plural 'pictures' and plural pronoun 'them' to match. Also streamline phrase 'where I go to' to 'I go to' and use 'on my phone' which is correct preposition for storing digital images.

× I prefer view in rural areas than urban areas because of the rural landscape is people and the air is fresh which make me feel relaxed and I also like to walk through the field and enjoy the nature and it make me close.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to urban areas because the rural landscape has fewer people and the air is fresh, which makes me feel relaxed, and I also like to walk through the fields and enjoy nature because it makes me feel closer to it.

Multiple plural errors: 'view' should be 'views'; comparison uses 'prefer X to Y' not 'than'; 'landscape is people' is incorrect—use 'has fewer people'; 'make' should agree with singular subject 'which' referring to 'air' or the whole clause, so 'makes'; 'field' should be plural 'fields' when speaking generally; 'enjoy the nature' drop 'the' and use 'enjoy nature'; 'it make me close' corrected to 'it makes me feel closer to it' for clarity and subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer views in my country, uh, because in my point, uh, my country is the best, uh, my country has fresh air, uh, umm, uh, cool weather and a lot of umm, uh, mountains, so I want to keep it.

✓ I prefer views in my country because, in my opinion, my country is the best; it has fresh air, cool weather, and many mountains, so I want to keep those photos.

Replace informal fillers and incorrect phrase 'in my point' with 'in my opinion'. 'A lot of mountains' is better as 'many mountains'. 'Keep it' is vague—use 'keep those photos' to reflect plural 'views'. Also use 'it has' for country features and adjust punctuation for clarity.