Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. "No, I actually not" yerine "No, not really" ya da "No, I don't really" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca tekrarlardan kaçının (ör. "I'm I'm") ve çoğul/sahiplik eklerini düzeltin ("family members' pictures" veya "pictures of my family"). Kısa bir konu cümlesi verin, sonra bir bağlaç ile bir neden veya örnek ekleyin.

Ví dụ: No, not really. I prefer taking portraits of people or photos of my family and pets, because I enjoy capturing emotions and personal moments.

Gợi ý: Cevap daha düzenli, kısa ve akıcı olmalı. "I prefer using urban areas" yerine "I prefer urban areas"; gereksiz sesler ve belirsiz ifadeler ("Uh", "these are really pulls me in", "I allow the CD sound") çıkarılmalı. Sebep verirken bağlaçlar kullanın (because, since, as) ve spesifik detaylar ekleyin (ör. örnek: gece ışıkları, sokak yaşamı).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because city lights and busy streets create interesting backgrounds for portraits, and there are more opportunities to photograph people and their activities.

Gợi ý: Cevap daha net ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. "I choose views in my country" yerine "I prefer views in my own country"; tekil/çoğul uyumunu düzeltin ("there are so many"). Karışık ifadeler ve anlamsız eklemeler ("as Turkish says", "it's rare Indian fabric") çıkarılmalı veya açıklanmalı. Bir neden verin ve bir örnek veya ünlü bir yer adı ekleyin.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many distinctive landscapes and historical sites; for example, I enjoy photographing ancient architecture and traditional markets that reflect our culture.

× No, I actually not.

✓ No, actually I'm not.

The original sentence omits the auxiliary verb 'am' required for negation with the verb 'to be' in the present simple. Correct form is 'I am not' or contracted 'I'm not'. Suggestion: use the correct auxiliary with negation (I am not / I'm not).

× I'm I'm interested in taking human pictures, taking my family members pictures or animals picture.

✓ I'm interested in taking pictures of people, my family members, or animals.

There are multiple noun-number and word-order errors. 'Human pictures' is unnatural; use 'pictures of people'. 'Family members pictures' should be 'pictures of my family members'. 'Animals picture' should be plural 'animals' or 'pictures of animals'. Suggestion: use 'pictures of + noun' and ensure nouns are plural when referring to more than one (pictures of people, pictures of my family members, pictures of animals).

× I'm not interested in views pictures at all.

✓ I'm not interested in pictures of views at all.

Word order and noun form are incorrect: 'views pictures' should be 'pictures of views'. Keep nouns consistent: 'pictures' (plural) and 'views' (plural) when referring generally. Suggestion: use 'pictures of views' or simply 'landscape photos'.

× I prefer using urban areas because I like taking pictures of people and I like to see the lights.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like taking pictures of people and seeing the lights.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by a noun or gerund without 'using' here; 'using urban areas' is awkward. Also 'I like to see the lights' can be streamlined to 'seeing the lights'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer urban areas' or 'I prefer photographing in urban areas.'

× Uh, these are really pulls me in and I allow the CD sound.

✓ Those things really pull me in, and I enjoy the city sounds.

Original has ungrammatical structure: 'these are really pulls me in' mixes subject/verb forms and 'I allow the CD sound' is unclear. Likely intended meaning is 'the lights/sounds pull me in' and 'I enjoy the city sounds.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (pull me in; enjoy the sounds).

× I love the city views.

✓ I love city views.

'The city views' is acceptable but 'city views' is more natural when speaking generally. If referring to a specific city's views, 'the' could be used. Suggestion: choose definite article only for specific references; otherwise omit.

× I choose views in my country because there is so many specific views and so many historical places in my country, as Turkish says, as Turkish people says, it's rare Indian fabric, I think.

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are so many unique sights and many historical places. As Turkish people say, we have rare cultural heritage, I think.

Multiple issues: 'I choose' is present simple but 'prefer' fits better for a general preference. 'There is so many' is incorrect; use 'there are' with plural 'so many'. 'Specific views' is odd; 'unique sights' is clearer. The phrase 'as Turkish says, as Turkish people says' has grammatical and article errors—use 'As Turkish people say'. 'It's rare Indian fabric' is unclear and likely incorrect; suggested clearer phrase 'we have rare cultural heritage'. Suggestions: use 'prefer' for general preferences, match 'there are' with plural nouns, and use plural verb forms for plural subjects. Use clearer vocabulary for cultural references.