Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms and concise phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid unclear words like "awesome youths" if you meant landscapes or people. Use linking words for cohesion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Photography is one of my main hobbies, and I often take pictures when I travel to capture landscapes and local people. For example, last month I photographed a coastal village at sunset, which helped me remember the colours and mood of the place.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatical: give a direct preference, then a specific reason with a linking word. Replace awkward phrases like "if use of nature is the most beautiful" with clear descriptions (e.g. fresh air, quiet, scenery).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas. I enjoy the peace and fresh air in the countryside, and the natural scenery—such as fields and forests—makes it easier for me to take beautiful photos.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: state your preference, then add one or two specific examples of what you like. Use linking words like "because" or "for example". Avoid repetitive words like "very" and "beautiful nature"; be specific about features.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes, such as mountain ranges and large lakes. For example, I often visit a nearby lake surrounded by forests, which offers great opportunities for landscape photography.

× Definitely yes, because I like to taking pictures very much and I can say that it's part of my hobby because I travel and like to taking pictures of awesome youths.

✓ Definitely yes, because I like taking pictures very much and I can say that it's part of my hobby because I travel and like taking pictures of awesome views.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the base gerund form 'taking' without 'to'. The original 'to taking' mixes infinitive marker 'to' with a gerund and is incorrect. Also 'youths' is incorrect in this context; use 'views' to match the question about taking pictures of views. Suggestion: use 'like taking' and choose the correct noun 'views' for clarity and meaning.

× Mostly I prefer rural areas because I enjoy time spending in rural areas and if use of nature is the most beautiful.

✓ Mostly I prefer rural areas because I enjoy spending time in rural areas and the use of nature there is the most beautiful.

The phrase 'enjoy time spending' is incorrect word order; the correct gerund phrase is 'enjoy spending time'. The clause 'if use of nature is the most beautiful' is ungrammatical; I corrected it to 'the use of nature there is the most beautiful' to convey meaning, though better alternatives are 'because the natural scenery is more beautiful' or 'because the nature there is most beautiful.' Ensure proper word order for gerund phrases and clearer noun phrases.

× Of course, I very like views in my country, because my country is very rich with a lot of mountains and lakes, with trees and beautiful nature.

✓ Of course, I really like the views in my country because it has many mountains, lakes, trees, and beautiful natural scenery.

The adverb 'very' cannot modify the verb 'like' directly in this way; use 'really like' or 'like very much.' Also 'my country is very rich with a lot of...' is awkward; use 'it has many...' or 'is rich in...' Articles and noun forms were improved: 'the views' instead of 'views' for specificity, and 'beautiful natural scenery' is a clearer noun phrase. Suggest using 'really like' and more natural collocations like 'has many' or 'is rich in.'