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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

I like taking picture of different views, especially in the city, which is metropolis. I like taking some, umm, different styles, buildings and to, uh, understand the local people's, uh, life and just that's all.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I pay for rural areas because you know, I'm a huge fan of natures and rural area have trains, mountains, glass. I can take picture of them and I very like the rural areas life. It's very chill and relax.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Umm I prefer umm build in other countries because I can't umm understand the other countries, uh cultures and histories. Umm also to umm talk with the local people to meet some new friends.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然和连贯的句子回答,减少语填充词(如 "umm", "uh"),并提供具体细节支持你的观点。可以先给出主题句,然后用一两句举例说明你喜欢哪些视角或拍摄风格,最后说明原因。注意语法(例如复数形式和冠词)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially in big cities. For example, I like capturing contrasts between modern skyscrapers and old residential streets to show how people live there. I also try to photograph street scenes to reveal everyday life and local culture.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应直接表明偏好,并用更准确的词汇和句子结构说明原因,避免不正确的短语(如 "I pay for")。提供具体例子(如特定景物、拍摄角度或情感),并用连接词(如 "because", "for example")使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love natural landscapes. For example, I enjoy photographing mountains, rivers and old trains, which create peaceful compositions. These scenes feel relaxing and give me time to compose thoughtful shots.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 先明确表达偏好,然后具体说明原因,避免重复的填充词并修正语法错误(如 "build" 应为 "to travel" 或 "buildings")。可以给出具体例子说明你想了解哪些文化或历史,以及如何与当地人互动。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I’m curious about different cultures and histories. For instance, I enjoy photographing ancient architecture and local markets to learn about traditions. I also like talking to locals to hear their stories and sometimes make new friends.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I like taking picture of different views, especially in the city, which is metropolis.

I like taking pictures of different views, especially in the city, which is a metropolis.

“picture”在此处应为复数“pictures”,因为表示泛指多张照片;“metropolis”前需要不定冠词“a”来表示“一个大都市”。建议:当表示泛指多个可数事物时用复数;单数可数名词前若指一类事物通常需要冠词。

Verb in the present participle form

× I like taking some, umm, different styles, buildings and to, uh, understand the local people's, uh, life and just that's all.

I like taking photos of different styles of buildings and understanding the local people's lives, and that's all.

句中并列动作要保持形式一致。原句同时使用动名词短语(taking)和不定式(to understand),应统一为动名词形式;此外“people's life”应为复数“people's lives”;“styles, buildings”搭配不正确,改为“styles of buildings”。建议:并列动词形式保持一致;复数名词用于表示多人各自的生活。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I pay for rural areas because you know, I'm a huge fan of natures and rural area have trains, mountains, glass.

I prefer rural areas because, you know, I'm a huge fan of nature and rural areas have trees, mountains, and grass.

“pay for”用法错误,应为“prefer”(偏好);“natures”错误,应该用不可数名词“nature”;“rural area have”主谓数不一致,应为复数“rural areas have”;原句中“glass”显然是拼写或用词错误,应改为“grass”或“greenery”。建议:动词短语用正确动词;注意可数/不可数名词及主谓一致;检查拼写并选择合适名词。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I can take picture of them and I very like the rural areas life.

I can take pictures of them and I really like rural life.

“picture”应为复数“pictures”;“I very like”是错误的副词搭配,英语中通常用“really like”或“like very much”;“the rural areas life”不自然,应简化为“rural life”。建议:常用副词搭配“really like”或句尾“like ... very much”;名词短语要简洁自然。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's very chill and relax.

It's very chill and relaxing.

“relax”是动词或不及物动词,作形容词应使用“relaxed”或“relaxing”。这里描述环境令人放松,应用“relaxing”;“chill”可作非正式形容词。建议:判断要用的词性(形容词/动词)并选择相应形式。

Present tense issue

× Umm I prefer umm build in other countries because I can't umm understand the other countries, uh cultures and histories.

I prefer buildings in other countries because I can't understand other countries' cultures and histories.

“prefer build”结构错误,应为“prefer buildings”或“prefer to visit buildings”;“the other countries”中冠词多余,改为“other countries' cultures”;“can't understand the other countries, cultures and histories”中断句混乱,需调整为“can't understand other countries' cultures and histories”。建议:偏好表达后接名词或不定式,整理所属关系用's或“of”。

Verb + -ing form

× Umm also to umm talk with the local people to meet some new friends.

Also to talk with local people and meet some new friends.

原句中不定式“to talk... to meet”在并列时形式重复,可改为并列不定式或并列动名词。为与前句保持一致,可使用不定式并列或将两者改为动名词形式。建议:并列不定式时可省略第二个“to”,如“to talk ... and meet ...”,或将两者都改为动名词以保持统一。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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