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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I am currently studying at the Belvedere Secondary School and Advanced Track.

Giám khảo

Where do you study?

Thí sinh

I currently study in the welfare school.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to study?

Thí sinh

No.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Thí sinh

I would like to change all the things in this.

Giám khảo

What are your future study plans?

Thí sinh

Nothing.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct, concise topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail to make the answer sound natural and informative. Avoid unnecessary long institution names if they confuse clarity. Use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: I am a student at Belvedere Secondary School, where I’m enrolled in the Advanced Track. I focus mainly on sciences, which helps prepare me for university.

Where do you study?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Be specific and clear about the place. If the school name is unusual, briefly clarify what kind of school it is. Use a topic sentence and one clarifying detail, linked with a simple connector like "which" or "and".

Ví dụ: I study at Welfare School, which is a local secondary school near my home. It has good facilities for sports and computers, so I use those after class.

Is it a good place to study?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Avoid one-word answers. Start with a clear opinion sentence and then give one or two specific reasons to support it, using linking words such as "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Not really, because the classrooms are overcrowded and the resources are limited. Therefore it can be hard to concentrate during lessons.

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Be precise about what you would change. Give 1–2 concrete improvements and explain why they would help, using connectors like "for example" or "so that".

Ví dụ: Yes. For example, I would improve the library and update the computers so students can do research more easily. I would also reduce class sizes so teachers can give more individual attention.

What are your future study plans?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Do not respond with a single word. Give a clear statement about your plans (or lack of plans) and explain briefly why, using linking words such as "because" or "however". If you have no plans, say what you might consider in the future.

Ví dụ: I don’t have definite plans yet, but I’m thinking of taking A-levels next year to prepare for university. However, I might also consider vocational training if I prefer a more practical route.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I am currently studying at the Belvedere Secondary School and Advanced Track.

I am currently studying at Belvedere Secondary School and taking the Advanced Track.

The original sentence is mostly acceptable but slightly awkward with the article 'the' before the school name and the phrase 'Advanced Track' needs a verb to show participation. Use no article for proper noun school names and add 'taking' to indicate enrollment in the program. Grammar problem type ID:6

Present tense issue

× I currently study in the welfare school.

I am currently studying at the Welfare School.

Use progressive form 'am studying' for current ongoing action and the preposition 'at' is standard for being enrolled at a school. Capitalize the proper name 'Welfare School' if it is the school's name. Grammar problem type ID:6

Sentence structure errors

× No.

No, it is not a good place to study.

Answering 'Is it a good place to study?' with just 'No' is grammatically correct but incomplete in a formal test setting. Expanding the short answer into a full sentence provides clarity and fits the conversational context. Grammar problem type ID:26

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I would like to change all the things in this.

I would like to change everything about it.

'All the things in this' uses an incorrect pronoun structure and awkward preposition. Replace with 'everything about it' to refer properly to the place being discussed and maintain natural English word order. Grammar problem type ID:12

Sentence structure errors

× Nothing.

I don't have any specific plans right now.

A single word reply 'Nothing' is grammatically possible but too informal and vague. Using a full negative sentence with 'do not have' and 'right now' fits the question 'What are your future study plans?' and clarifies meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

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