Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give a concise, specific reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and fill words. Also correct vocabulary (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike', 'my parents', 'accidents'). Keep answers to at most 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were afraid of accidents because several relatives had been seriously injured in motorcycle crashes, so they didn’t allow me to ride. As a result, I usually walked or used public transport to get around.

Gợi ý: Reduce fillers and hesitations; use clearer sentence structure and linking words (because, so, therefore). Give specific details and one short example. Use correct expressions (e.g., 'popular', 'due to heavy traffic', 'faster than cars'). Limit to 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Bangladesh, especially in Dhaka, because they are easier to manoeuvre in heavy traffic. For example, many commuters use motorcycles or rickshaws to reach work faster than by car or bus. Therefore, bikes remain a common and practical choice for daily travel.

× No, I don't have any bike when I was child because my father and my family don't like bike because of my par.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my father and my family don't like bikes because of my part.

Errors: 'don't have' with past context should be past tense 'didn't have' (Past tense issue ID 5) and 'any bike' needs an article 'a bike' (Article errors). 'when I was child' needs 'a child' (Article errors). 'don't like bike' should be 'don't like bikes' to refer to the activity in general (Singular and plural issue ID 1). Also 'because of my par' seems to be a typo; 'part' still isn't clear. Suggestion: use 'because of my past experience' or 'because of an accident in my family' depending on intended meaning. To fix tense consistency, use past or present appropriately: 'didn't have' for past possession; keep 'don't like' if parents still dislike bikes now.

× My in my family and there are a lot of relatives are dying before the bike accident and that's why my parents don't like that much.

✓ In my family many relatives died in bike accidents before, and that's why my parents don't like them very much.

Errors: 'there are a lot of relatives are dying before the bike accident' mixes present tense with past and uses incorrect continuous/passive forms (Past tense issue ID 5 and Sentence structure errors ID 26). Use simple past 'died' to indicate past events. 'a lot of relatives' is better as 'many relatives' for countable plural (Quantifier/advice ID 14). 'don't like that much' is vague; specify 'them very much' to refer to bikes. Recommendation: keep tense consistent (past for events that happened) and use plural 'relatives' and plural reference 'them'.

× Yes, here, uh, uh, in my, in our country, bikes are very, uh, popular because, uh, in the busy city of Bangladesh, uh, the capital city of Bangladesh is Dhaka, where many of the people are used by because there are a lot of traffic.

✓ Yes, in our country bikes are very popular, especially in the busy capital city Dhaka, where many people use them because there is a lot of traffic.

Errors: 'many of the people are used by' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'many people use them' (Sentence structure errors ID 26 and Incorrect passive voice ID 21). 'there are a lot of traffic' should be 'there is a lot of traffic' because 'traffic' is uncountable and takes singular verb (Subject-verb agreement ID 27 and Article/quantifier issues ID 22/14). Also remove filler words for clarity. Suggestion: use active voice 'use them' and correct verb agreement with 'traffic'.

× If you want to one plus to another place, uh, you may lot of time in.

✓ If you want to go from one place to another, you may spend a lot of time doing so.

Errors: 'want to one plus to another place' is a word-order and vocabulary error; correct phrase is 'go from one place to another' (Sentence structure errors ID 26). 'you may lot of time in' is missing verb and article; use 'you may spend a lot of time' (Sentence without a verb ID 23 and Article/quantifier ID 22/14). Suggestion: use 'go from...to...' and 'spend a lot of time' to express time spent traveling.