Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No I didn't, but my parents rent a bike for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bike is really popular in my country. On the weekend lot of people ride bike on the road and we have a public rented bike. You can go there and rent a bike. So back is really popular in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但不够自然与详尽。时态和用词有小错误(如 rent 应改为 hired/rented),句子可以更流畅并补充少量细节。建议用一到两句说明情况并给出时间或频率,并使用正确的过去式。示例结构:主题句 + 一两个细节,长度不超过5句。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. My parents usually rented/hired one for me on weekends so I could ride in the park.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但有多处语法与用词错误,且有重复(多次说“popular”)。建议整理为一到三句:先给出直接观点,再用具体细节支持(何时/哪里人们骑车、共有自行车服务的情况、举例),并使用恰当的名词复数和时态。避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people cycle on weekends and in city parks, and there is a public bike-sharing system where you can rent a bike from kiosks around the city.
× No I didn't, but my parents rent a bike for me.
✓ No, I didn't, but my parents rented a bike for me.
句子表达过去发生的动作,应使用过去式。主句“didn't”已为过去时,所以从句也应使用过去式“rented”。建议:描述过去的行为时,动词使用过去式。
× Yes, bike is really popular in my country.
✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country.
主语应与动词和数一致。此处谈论一般现象,指复数自行车,应该用复数名词“bikes”并使动词与之保持一致“are”。建议:可数名词表示一类事物时常用复数。
× On the weekend lot of people ride bike on the road and we have a public rented bike.
✓ On the weekend, a lot of people ride bikes on the road, and we have a public bike rental service.
“lot of”前需冠词“a lot of”;“ride bike”应为“ride bikes”;“public rented bike”表达不自然,应改为短语“public bike rental service”或“publicly rented bikes”。建议:使用“a lot of”表示许多,复数名词配合;用自然的名词搭配表达公共租赁服务。
× You can go there and rent a bike.
✓ You can go there and rent a bike.
此句语法正确,保持原句。只是前后文需一致:若前文用复数泛指,也可说 “rent a bike” 表示租一辆,句子本身无数错误。
× So back is really popular in my country.
✓ So bikes are really popular in my country.
疑似打字错误“back”应为“bikes”;同时需使用复数“bikes are”来表达普遍性。建议:检查拼写并保证主谓数一致。