Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve düzenli kurun. Önce doğrudan konu cümlesi kurun (ör. “Evet, çocukken bisikletim vardı.”), sonra bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örn. “when I was a child”, “it was big and pink”, “there were flowers on my bike”, “I used to ride it every weekend with my friends”). Akış için bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın (e.g. “and”, “so”, “because”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was big and pink with flower stickers on the frame, and I used to ride it every weekend with my friends. We often rode to the park because it was close to our neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha net ve tutarlı yapın. Önce doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin (ör. “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular.”), sonra nedenini açık ve spesifik nedenlerle açıklayın. Yanlış kelime kullanımlarına dikkat edin (örn. “bars” yerine “buses” veya “cars”; “trials” muhtemelen “cyclists” veya “young people” demek istediniz). Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun (e.g. “because”, “so”).

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or public transport because the roads are busy and there are few bike lanes. As a result, only a small number of cyclists, mostly young people or hobby riders, use bikes regularly.

× I did have a bike when I was child

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child

The noun 'child' needs the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct in this context. Use 'a child' to indicate one member of the group 'children'. Suggestion: Add 'a' before 'child' whenever referring to being 'a child' in past descriptions.

× it was a a big and pink and there is some flowers in my bike

✓ It was big and pink, and there were some flowers on my bike

Multiple issues: duplicate 'a a' — remove extra article. Coordinate adjectives do not need 'and' between them; use commas or 'and' appropriately. 'There is' should match plural noun 'flowers', so use 'there were'. Preposition for attachments on a bike is 'on' not 'in'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words, use 'big and pink' or 'big, pink', change 'there is' to 'there were' for plural past, and use 'on' for placement.

× and I used to ride it every weekend with my friends and I'm. Riding in.

✓ and I used to ride it every weekend with my friends, and I was riding it then

Fragment and incorrect use of present continuous 'I'm. Riding in.' The phrase 'used to' indicates a habitual past action; continue with past construction. The fragment should be connected and expressed as a complete clause, e.g., 'I was riding it then' or remove entirely. Suggestion: Replace the fragment with a full past clause consistent with 'used to' (habitual past), or simply end after 'friends'.

× I don't think so. The bikes are popular in my country because the people are driving cars, bars or something else.

✓ I don't think so. Bikes are not very popular in my country because people drive cars, buses, or use other transport

Awkward present progressive 'are driving' is unnecessary for general facts; use simple present 'drive'. 'The bikes' and 'the people' use unnecessary definite article; use general plural 'bikes' and 'people'. 'bars' is likely a typo for 'buses' or 'cars, buses' — corrected to 'buses' to make sense. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual/general statements and remove unnecessary definite articles. Correct nouns ('buses' instead of 'bars').

× Only the trials can ride bike.

✓ Only cyclists or those who train can ride bikes

The sentence is ungrammatical: 'trials' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'cyclists' or 'those who train'. 'Ride bike' needs an article or plural: 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun ('cyclists' or 'people who train') and pluralize 'bikes' or include an article.