BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I don't remember if I have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had seen many people nowadays loving bicycle because of the pension in the state of almost.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Be direct, use past tense, give a clear topic sentence and one or two brief supporting details. Avoid vague phrasing like "I don't remember if" without follow-up. You could state whether you did or didn’t, then add a short reason or memory to enrich the answer and make it natural.

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived in a hilly area and my parents felt cycling was unsafe there.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Use present tense and clear sentence structure. Start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons and examples, using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Avoid unclear words like "pension in the state of almost." Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cycle to work or school because it is cheaper and healthier than driving, and recent government campaigns have promoted cycling as an eco-friendly option.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I don't remember if I have a bike.

I don't remember if I had a bike.

The question asked about possession in childhood (past), so the clause should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past tense consistently when referring to past events (I don't remember if I had a bike).

Present tense issue

× Yes, I had seen many people nowadays loving bicycle because of the pension in the state of almost.

Yes, I have seen many people nowadays who love bicycles, because of the increase in public bike programs.

Several issues: 'had seen' (past perfect) is inappropriate with 'nowadays' (present time); use present perfect 'have seen' for experiences continuing to present. 'Nowadays' requires present reference. 'loving bicycle' is ungrammatical: use 'who love bicycles' (plural) and correct noun form. The phrase 'because of the pension in the state of almost' is unclear and likely incorrect; I replaced with a plausible reason 'because of the increase in public bike programs.' Suggestion: align tense with time adverbials, use relative clauses for people (who love bicycles), use plural for countable nouns, and express reasons clearly.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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