Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yet I did I have a buy when I was a child. Uh.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes is popular for children and middle-aged in my country. Bikes are convenient to ride and it's very very helpful.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngữ pháp đúng và tránh lỗi phát âm/viết (ví dụ “buy” vs “bike”). Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó có thể bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết liên quan (ai tặng, màu sắc, tần suất sử dụng) dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh tiếng ồm và ngập ngừng.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was about eight, which my parents bought for me. I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood and play with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số nhiều/động từ), tránh lặp từ (“I think”/“popular”), và đưa chi tiết cụ thể để củng cố ý kiến (ví dụ: dùng xe đạp trong thành phố, để đi làm, hoặc dùng cho thể dục). Dùng liên từ (because, so, for example) để làm rõ lý do. Giữ 2–4 câu, tự nhiên và mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and middle-aged workers often ride bikes to school or work since they are cheap and easy to park.
× Yet I did I have a buy when I was a child. Uh.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.
The student used incorrect verbs and auxiliary structure for past tense. Use 'did' as the auxiliary only in questions or to add emphasis; the main verb should be in past simple ('had'). Also 'buy' is wrong form and word; use the noun 'bike'. Suggestion: For affirmative past statements, use subject + past verb (I had). If emphasizing with 'did', follow with base verb: 'I did have a bike.'
× Yes, I think I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes is popular for children and middle-aged in my country.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes are popular among children and middle-aged people in my country.
The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'bikes'; it should be 'are'. Also 'middle-aged' should be followed by a noun like 'people', and the preposition 'among' is more natural than 'for' in this context. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with singular/plural nouns and use appropriate noun phrases: 'middle-aged people' and 'popular among'.
× Bikes are convenient to ride and it's very very helpful.
✓ Bikes are convenient to ride and they are very, very helpful.
The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular noun, but 'bikes' is plural, so use 'they'. Also 'helpful' describes people or things; 'useful' is a slightly better collocation for objects. Suggestion: Match pronoun number to the noun and choose collocations: 'they are very useful/helpful.'