Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on grammatical accuracy, clearer word choice, and concise structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., 'was' not 'were'), use precise vocabulary ('second-hand bike' instead of 'second hand dry'), and avoid hesitations/fillers (uh, umm). Keep to under five sentences and ensure coherence (use linking words like 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was in secondary school because my mother bought me a second-hand bicycle. I rode it to school every day since it was faster than taking the bus, and it also made me feel more independent.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and avoid repetition. Use correct sentence structure ('Vietnam, which is a developing country') and singular/plural agreement ('bicycles and motorbikes are common'). Provide one or two concrete details (e.g., affordability, practicality in crowded streets). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to improve coherence. Remove fillers and finish the thought (e.g., 'play a vital role').

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Vietnam, which is a developing country. Bicycles and motorbikes are common because they are affordable and practical for navigating crowded streets, and they play a vital role in daily transport for many people.

× Yes, when I were a secondary school, my mom bought me a second hand dry uh and I really love it.

✓ Yes, when I was in secondary school, my mom bought me a second-hand bike and I really loved it.

'Were' is incorrect for the singular subject I in past tense; use 'was' (subject-verb agreement). Missing preposition 'in' before 'secondary school' (preposition error but only corrected because it affects grammar clarity). 'Second hand' should be hyphenated as 'second-hand' when used as a compound adjective. 'Dry uh' is likely a misspoken word; corrected to 'bike' to make sense. 'Love' should be in past tense 'loved' because the context refers to a past time ('when I was'). Suggestion: use 'I was' for singular past, include 'in' for institutions, hyphenate compound adjectives, and keep verb tense consistent with time frame.

× Uh, I wrote it to school every single days, uh, because it's faster than booking umm and it's make me feel more UN independent.

✓ I rode it to school every single day because it's faster than walking and it made me feel more independent.

'Wrote' is wrong; the intended verb is 'rode' (past of ride) — this is a past tense verb choice error. 'Every single days' mixes singular/plural; use 'every single day' (singular). 'Booking' is incorrect word; context requires 'walking' (wrong word choice but treated as verb choice). 'It's make' is subject-verb agreement and tense: with past context about feelings while using the bike, use 'made' (past) or keep present for general truth; here past 'made' fits. 'UN independent' appears as filler; corrected to 'independent'. Suggestion: choose correct lexical verbs (ride/rode, walk/walking), keep 'every single day', and match verb tense for the time referenced.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? Student: Yes, I live in Vietnam, so which is, uh, developing countries, uh, and bicycle or motorbikes are very common, umm, because they are affordable and practical for getting around crowded city, uh, and also is also play a vital.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, and bicycles or motorbikes are very common because they are affordable and practical for getting around crowded cities, and they also play a vital role.

'Which is, uh, developing countries' has number disagreement and incorrect relative clause: 'Vietnam' is singular, so use 'which is a developing country' (singular). 'Bicycle or motorbikes' mixes singular and plural; use 'bicycles or motorbikes' (plural) or 'a bicycle or a motorbike' (singular). 'Getting around crowded city' needs plural 'cities' or article 'the crowded city'; here use 'crowded cities'. 'And also is also play a vital' has multiple errors: missing subject for verb 'play', extra 'is', and missing noun after 'vital' (e.g., 'role'). Corrected to 'they also play a vital role.' Suggestion: ensure subject-number agreement, match singular/plural consistently, include necessary articles, and provide the correct noun collocation 'play a vital role'.