Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question (Yes/No), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). For example, mention when you got the bike, who gave it to you, how often you used it, or a short memory to make your response natural and relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood nearly every day. Because I rode so often, I became quite confident and made many friends while cycling.

Gợi ý: Your answer answers the question but has grammar issues and vague phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add specific details and a linking word. Use accurate verbs and relevant vocabulary (commute, among, often). Keep it concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute. For example, children often ride to school, and office workers commonly cycle to nearby jobs since it is cheaper and faster in congested areas.

× As I had a fight when I was, that's right.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It seems the student tried to answer affirmatively but used an incorrect structure 'As I had a fight when I was, that's right.' This contains fragments and misplaced clauses. Use a clear, complete response to a past possession question: start with an explicit affirmative phrase ('Yes, I did.') followed by a complete clause describing past possession ('I had a bike when I was a child.'). This fixes sentence structure and conveys the intended meaning. Suggested improvement: Practice forming direct answers to Yes/No questions in past tense: 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't,' then add a full clause if more information is needed.

× It's very popular in my country because many children and many company workers used to communicating by bicycle.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country because many children and many company workers used to communicate by bicycle.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'It's very popular' uses a vague pronoun 'It' that does not clearly refer to 'bikes' and causes agreement problems; 'used to communicating' is incorrect verb form after 'used to.' Use the plural noun 'Bicycles' or 'Bikes' as the subject to match plural popularity. After 'used to' the base verb should be used ('communicate'), not the -ing form. Also 'company workers' is grammatically acceptable but could be 'employees' for naturalness. Suggested improvement: Ensure the subject matches what you refer to (use nouns, not 'it' when referring to plural items) and remember that 'used to' is followed by the base verb: 'used to communicate.'