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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child? Yes I did. I had a backhoe when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Exactly. Recent, recently, a lot of people like to ride back to exercise. It's in the evening. Umm, Apart from that, yeah, there are a lot of people.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Be accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid repeating the examiner's question, and use the correct word ("bike" not "backhoe"). Add one brief supporting detail (when you got it or how you used it) and keep total length under five sentences. Use linking words if you add more than one detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I rode it every day after school. It helped me gain confidence and improved my balance.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct answer first, then add two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because / in addition). Avoid filler words and repetition, choose precise vocabulary (e.g. "cycling" or "bicycles" instead of "back"). Keep answers coherent and within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular. In recent years many people cycle for exercise and commuting, especially in the evenings after work, because it is cheap and healthy. In addition, local bike lanes and rental schemes have made cycling more convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I did. I had a backhoe when I was a child.

Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The word 'backhoe' is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but the sentence uses past tense correctly. Replace 'backhoe' with 'bicycle' to match the question about bikes. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken punctuation. Suggestion: Use the past simple for past habits (I had).

Present tense issue

× Exactly. Recent, recently, a lot of people like to ride back to exercise.

Yes, recently a lot of people have liked riding bikes for exercise.

The original mixes 'recent' and 'recently' and uses 'like to ride back', which is incorrect. The tense should reflect recent trend: present perfect ('have liked') or simple present ('like'). 'Ride back' is wrong; use 'ride bikes' or 'ride bicycles'. Also use 'for exercise' to show purpose. Suggestion: choose 'Recently, many people have started riding bikes for exercise' for clarity. Note: This correction focuses on present tense usage and gerund form (riding).

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It's in the evening.

They often ride in the evening.

'It's in the evening' is vague and uses 'it' incorrectly; the intended subject is 'people' or 'they'. Use correct subject and 'in the evening' is fine as a time phrase. Suggestion: Use 'They often ride in the evening' to specify who and frequency.

Sentence structure errors

× Umm, Apart from that, yeah, there are a lot of people.

Apart from that, yes, there are many people who ride bikes.

The original is fragmented and informal. 'A lot of people' is acceptable but 'many people who ride bikes' clarifies the meaning and fits the question. 'Apart from that' should be followed by a clear clause. Suggestion: Keep responses complete: 'Apart from that, there are many people who ride bikes.'

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