Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct basic grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct past-tense verbs and vocabulary (e.g., "rode" not "wrote"), and avoid repetition. Add one specific supporting detail (where you rode or a memorable moment) and use a linking word if you expand. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My grandmother bought me a bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I rode it almost every day. I loved exploring the neighborhood, especially the small park near my house, and I practised little tricks like riding on one wheel until I felt confident.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific reasons; correct grammar and remove hesitations and repetitions. State one or two concrete reasons why bikes are popular (e.g., dense cities, good cycling infrastructure, cost) and use linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise and finish the thought.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Japan because cities are dense and public cycling infrastructure is good. For example, many people use bikes to travel short distances to work or the station, and they are cheaper and easier to park than cars.

× I had one bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'one bike' is grammatically correct but unnatural here; native speakers use the article 'a' with singular countable nouns. Replace 'one bike' with 'a bike' for more natural English. Suggestion: Use 'a' or 'the' with singular countable nouns unless you specifically emphasize the number.

× My grandmother bought me bought it for my birthday and I wrote it almost every day.

✓ My grandmother bought it for my birthday and I rode it almost every day.

The sentence contains a duplicated verb 'bought' and uses 'wrote' incorrectly. 'Bought' is the past tense of 'buy' and should appear only once; 'rode' is the correct past tense of 'ride' (not 'wrote'). Suggestion: Remove duplicate words and use the correct past tense verb for riding a bike: 'rode'.

× I loved exploring the neighborhood and practicing the new tracks tricks.

✓ I loved exploring the neighborhood and practicing new tricks on the tracks.

Word order and choice are awkward: 'new tracks tricks' incorrectly places nouns and adjectives. Reorder to 'practicing new tricks on the tracks' to place the adjective 'new' before 'tricks' and use a prepositional phrase 'on the tracks' for location. Suggestion: Maintain natural adjective-noun order and use prepositions to show relationships.

× Yes, I do think on bikes are one of the major means of transportation in my country here in Japan.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are one of the major means of transportation in my country, here in Japan.

The preposition 'on' before 'bikes' is incorrect. Also the sentence benefits from a comma before 'here in Japan.' Remove 'on' and add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Do not use 'on' before the plural noun when stating a general opinion: say 'I think bikes are...'.

× Uh, one of the reason is that the the they don't have cars.

✓ Uh, one of the reasons is that they don't have cars.

'One of the reason' is incorrect because 'one of the' must be followed by a plural noun: 'reasons.' Also there is a duplication 'the the' and an extra pronoun 'they' after 'the.' Remove duplicates and use the plural noun. Suggestion: Use 'one of the reasons' + clause; avoid repeating words.

× Instead, they use bicycles.

✓ Instead, they use bicycles.

This sentence is grammatically correct but short; keep as is. No correction needed. Suggestion: Sentence is fine; it's a clear simple present statement used to state a general habit.

× Are, you know, they use use them for the.

✓ They use them for commuting, you know.

The original has disfluent fillers and a duplicated 'use' and an incomplete phrase 'for the.' Restructure to a complete clause: 'They use them for commuting, you know.' This completes the thought and removes duplication. Suggestion: Remove duplicated words and complete the prepositional phrase; use a suitable noun like 'commuting' or 'transport'.