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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I don't have a way myself.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, make a popular my country very, very popular and uh in my home I I uh. I have my uh one time back.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Start with a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, who gave it to you, or a memory). Use correct past tense and avoid vague words like “way.” Keep it to one to three sentences and use linking words if adding details (for example, “when,” “because,” or “so”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it from my parents when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school every day because it was faster than walking.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: Your reply is repetitive, disfluent and not informative. Begin with a clear opinion about popularity, then give specific reasons or examples (e.g., commuting, exercise, traffic, and bike-sharing schemes). Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “also.” Keep sentences short and avoid fillers such as “uh.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work. For example, cities have bike lanes and shared bike services, so a lot of students and office workers ride bikes daily.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I don't have a way myself.

I didn't have one myself.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; change to 'didn't have'. Also 'a way' is unnatural in this context; 'one' or 'a bike' is clearer. Use 'myself' only if emphasizing personal possession, but 'one' is sufficient.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, make a popular my country very, very popular and uh in my home I I uh.

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and I had one at home when I was a child.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains repetition and unclear structure. The examiner asked about general popularity (use present simple: 'are very popular') and the student should then state personal experience in the past ('I had one at home when I was a child'). Combine into two clear clauses and remove filler sounds. This fixes tense consistency and sentence structure.

Past tense issue

× I have my uh one time back.

I had one a long time ago.

The phrase 'have ... time back' mixes present tense and unclear time expression. The question is about childhood (past), so use past tense 'had'. A natural time phrase is 'a long time ago' or 'when I was a child'. This corrects tense and provides a clearer time reference.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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