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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bike are quite popular in my country because growing up we had like two or three kids riding one particular bike, but it wasn't owned by them, it was owned by me. So you literally had fun ride the bike. In my country, literally everybody now area had a bike As of that time, because we were still little and kids, we had a little fun riding the bike together.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it and then switches topic to bikes in the country. To improve: answer directly with a short topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and limit to 2–4 sentences. For example, state whether you owned a bike, mention age or who you rode with, and a short reason or memory.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven years old. Although it was small, I rode it every afternoon with my neighbors, and we often raced down the lane. As a result, I learned to balance and gained confidence quickly.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question but is informal, repetitive, and contains grammatical errors. To improve: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), use linking words (for example, however, because, so), avoid repetition and slang (like "literally"), and give one specific example or statistic if possible. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use accurate grammar (e.g., plural agreement, past vs. present tense).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and children often share them. For example, when I was a child, three of us would take turns riding the same bicycle after school, which made cycling a common pastime. Therefore, cycling remains widespread both as transport and recreation.

Ngữ pháp

Third person singular issue

× Yes, bike are quite popular in my country because growing up we had like two or three kids riding one particular bike, but it wasn't owned by them, it was owned by me.

Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because, growing up, we would often have two or three kids riding one particular bike, but it wasn't owned by them; it was owned by me.

Original sentence uses 'bike are' which has subject-verb disagreement and count mismatch. Change 'bike' to plural 'bikes' to match 'are'. 'Growing up' is a time phrase and should be set off with commas. 'We had like' is informal; use 'we would often have' to indicate habitual past action. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches the verb and use appropriate past habitual construction. 'grammar_problem_type_id':2 },{

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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