Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct the tense and sentence structure, and avoid redundancy. Use one or two brief supporting details with linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”) to explain why and give an example. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. Instead, I often borrowed bikes from my friends, so I could still ride occasionally after school.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, word choice and sentence organization. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons linked with words like “because” and “however.” Use correct noun forms and concise phrasing, and avoid inserting opinion phrases awkwardly at the end.

Ví dụ: Bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for long distances and there are few bike lanes. However, cycling is more common in some cities where governments are improving cycling infrastructure.

× No, I didn't. I couldn't have my parents couldn't afford them. I usually borrow from my friends.

✓ No, I didn't. My parents couldn't afford one, so I usually borrowed one from my friends.

This sentence contains multiple issues: an incorrect modal construction ('I couldn't have my parents couldn't afford them' is ungrammatical) and tense inconsistency. The intended meaning is past inability due to parents' lack of money, so use past modal 'couldn't' with a clear subject and object: 'My parents couldn't afford one.' Also maintain past tense for habitual past actions: 'I usually borrowed one from my friends.' Suggestion: separate ideas into two clauses connected logically and keep past tense consistent for past situations. Grammar problem type ID: 5, 26, 4

× Bicycle are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for longer communities and there aren't many bike lanes personally I think.

✓ Bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for longer commutes, and there aren't many bike lanes. Personally, I think so.

Problems identified: 'Bicycle are' has a singular/plural mismatch—use plural 'Bicycles are.' 'Communities' is the wrong word; the intended word is 'commutes' (the act of traveling to work). Missing comma and run-on sentence: add a comma before 'and' and separate the comment 'Personally, I think so.' Also 'personally I think' should be a parenthetical comment with proper punctuation. Suggestion: correct plural agreement, replace incorrect noun, add punctuation to avoid run-on sentence, and make the personal comment a separate clause.