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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have and I have a small pink bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, it's really popular because when we after dinner, more person will umm, by bike with their children.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法和时态不准确,回答可以更自然并包含主题句和简短细节。建议使用正确时态(过去式),合并重复信息,最多不超过5句,并用连词连接。例如先直接回答,再补充一两句描述如颜色、什么时候拥有或与谁一起骑。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,语法和词汇错误较多,应先给出直接观点,然后用清晰具体的原因或例子支持。注意主谓一致、时态和拼写(people, ride)。使用连接词(for example, because)使表达更连贯。简短具体地说明何时、谁、哪里更常见。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many families go cycling together in the evenings. For example, after dinner you can see parents riding bicycles with their children in parks and on quiet streets.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have and I have a small pink bike.

Yes, I had — I had a small pink bike.

原句使用的現在時“have”與考官在過去時("Did you have... when you were a child?")的提問不一致。回答應使用過去時態,將“have”改為過去式“had”。另外可用破折號或連接詞分隔兩部分以更自然地表達。建議在描述過去擁有的東西時統一使用過去時,如“I had a small pink bike.”。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yeah, it's really popular because when we after dinner, more person will umm, by bike with their children.

Yeah, it's really popular because after dinner, more people will, um, ride bikes with their children.

原句存在多個問題: 1) “when we after dinner” 結構錯誤,應改為“after dinner”或“when we go out after dinner”,省略“we”或補全動詞; 2) “more person” 單複數不一致,應為“more people”(復數); 3) “by bike” 在此處用法不當,應使用動詞短語“ride bikes”來表達“騎自行車”; 4) 時態和語氣可保留將來/習慣性用法“will ride”或改為一般現在時表習慣“ride”。 建議將句子簡化並修正人稱與動詞形式,例如:“After dinner, more people ride bikes with their children.” 或保留“will”表示未來/傾向性“more people will ride bikes with their children.”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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