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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did, but I was not very good at it. Umm, I only could ride a bike until I was like 12.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I would say so because, you know, in my primary school time, at the time I was going to primary school, many students wrote a bike, you know. And.

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Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然,但存在犹豫词(umm)和语法/表达小问题(only could → could only;ride a bike until I was like 12 含义不够清晰)。建议:1) 去掉填充词,回答时直接陈述要点;2) 使用清晰的句子顺序并加一到两句具体细节(例如何时学会、为何停骑或感受);3) 使用连接词保持流畅(e.g. but, because)。示例练习句子:"I did. I learned to ride when I was six, but I wasn’t very confident, so I stopped riding regularly after I turned twelve because I moved to a city where cycling wasn’t convenient."

Ví dụ: I did. I learned to ride when I was about six, but I wasn’t very good at it, so I stopped riding regularly after I was twelve because my family moved to a busy city where cycling wasn’t convenient.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答信息重复且含糊,存在多次填充词(you know)和语法错误(wrote a bike → rode a bike)。建议:1) 避免重复表述,直接给出观点并用具体例子支持;2) 改正动词错误并使用连接词(for example, because)来组织细节;3) 给出一两个具体理由(例如通勤方便、经济、学校文化)。示例练习句子:"Yes, I think so, because many people use bikes for short trips. For example, when I was in primary school most students rode bikes to class, since it was cheap and convenient."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so because many people use bikes for short trips. For example, when I was in primary school most students rode bikes to class, since it was cheap and convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I only could ride a bike until I was like 12.

I could only ride a bike until I was about 12.

句中副词位置不当。助动词 could 与其修饰语 only 的典型顺序是“could only + 动词”,而不是“only could + 动词”。把 only 放在情态动词之后或动词前会更自然。此外用“about 12”比“like 12”更正式、地道。建议:把 only 放在情态动词之后或动词前(e.g. "could only ride" 或 "only be able to ride")。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× in my primary school time, at the time I was going to primary school, many students wrote a bike, you know.

When I was in primary school, many students rode bikes.

原句存在多处问题:1) 冗余短语“in my primary school time, at the time I was going to primary school”重复表达时间,应合并为“When I was in primary school”。2) 动词错误用“wrote”应为“rode”(骑)。3) 冠词和单复数不当,习惯表达为“rode bikes”或“rode a bike”。建议:使用简洁的时间状语+正确动词(ride 的过去式 rode),并用复数或不定冠词视具体语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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