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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because my parents couldn't afford 1 so I used to borrow my neighbors bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we use them to travel around.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise (max 5 sentences), add a brief supporting detail with a linking word, and correct punctuation/possessive forms. Mention one specific example or effect to enrich content.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride to the park, so I still learned how to ride and made friends that way.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Provide a bit more specific detail and use linking words to make it more informative and natural. Give an example or reason (e.g., cost, traffic, environment) to support your statement and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or market areas to avoid traffic and save money.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because my parents couldn't afford 1 so I used to borrow my neighbors bike.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one, so I used to borrow my neighbor's bike.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'child' and numeral '1' used instead of 'one'; missing possessive apostrophe in 'neighbor's'; punctuation run-on sentence. Reason: 'child' as a singular noun needs the definite/indefinite article 'a' in this context. Numbers should be written as words in formal writing; using 'one' is grammatically correct. Possession requires an apostrophe + s for singular noun 'neighbor'. Also, join clauses properly with a comma before 'so' to avoid a run-on. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'child', replace '1' with 'one', make 'neighbor's' possessive, and insert a comma before 'so'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we use them to travel around.

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we use them to travel around.

Although the sentence is generally correct, some speakers prefer 'get around' or 'travel around the city/country' for clarity. The current preposition usage 'to travel around' is acceptable. No grammatical correction necessary. Suggestion: optionally specify the area: 'to get around' or 'to travel around the city' for clearer meaning.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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