Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; give a clear topic sentence and 1–2 specific supporting details. Fix short sentence fragments and word choice (e.g., "ride" or "cycle" instead of "bike to"; "when I was a child/teenager" consistently). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "and", "so", "for"). Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager. I used to ride it around my village to visit friends and go to church, and sometimes I cycled to the market to buy small things. Riding a bike was a convenient and healthy way to get around.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and pronunciation mistakes ("bikes", not "banks"); avoid informal endings like "So bye." Start with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Use linking words ("because", "for example", "therefore") to make your answer coherent. Keep answers to up to 4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, adults often cycle to their offices to avoid traffic, which also helps reduce air pollution and saves money on transport.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager and I used to bike to. To write. And to travel around my village and to go to church.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager and I used to ride it to visit friends, to go to school, to travel around my village, and to go to church.

The original contains fragmented sentences and wrong verb choice: 'bike to' is informal and incomplete. The phrase 'To write.' is incorrect in context (likely intended 'to ride' or 'to go to school'); multiple activities should be joined in a parallel structure. Use past tense and 'used to' + base verb for habitual past actions (used to ride, used to go). Ensure coordinated infinitives share the same form and include objects where needed.

× Banks are quite popular, even the adult population use the bikes for riding even to their works and and that way it'll help to reduce pollution. So bye.

✓ Bikes are quite popular; even adults use them to commute to work, and that helps reduce pollution.

The original has multiple issues: 'Banks' is a wrong word (probably 'Bikes'), subject-verb agreement ('adult population use' should be 'adults use' or 'the adult population uses'), incorrect plural/form 'works' should be 'work', awkward phrasing 'for riding even to their works', and informal 'So bye.' Remove filler and make sentence concise. Use 'use them to commute to work' for natural expression and ensure verb matches subject and tense consistency.