Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense/word choice and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details and linking words. For example, say you enjoyed riding, explain briefly why or how auxiliary (training) wheels were used, and finish with a concise remark.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, so my parents bought me one when I was five. At first I used training wheels until I learned to balance, and after that I rode it almost every day to visit friends.

Gợi ý: Make the response more precise and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give a reason with a linking word and a specific example. Use plural/singular agreement and avoid filler words like “uh.”

Ví dụ: Not really — electric scooters are more popular among young people in my country. For example, many students choose compact e-scooters because they are faster and easier to park, so you see them on the way to school every morning.

× I enjoyed biking, so I decided to buy me a bike for myself.

✓ I enjoyed biking, so I decided to buy a bike for myself.

The sentence uses an incorrect reflexive/object pronoun phrase 'buy me a bike for myself.' In English, when the subject is buying something for themselves, use 'buy a bike for myself' or 'buy myself a bike.' Remove the extra 'me' to correct the past-tense action; the tense (decided) is already correct. Suggestion: say 'I decided to buy myself a bike' or 'I decided to buy a bike for myself.'

× However, I need some auxiliary wheels when.

✓ However, I needed some auxiliary wheels then.

The original mixes present tense 'need' with a past context and uses 'when' incorrectly. 'Some auxiliary wheels' is acceptable but the sentence refers to a past time so 'needed' should be used (Past tense issue). Also 'when' is wrong as a time adverb; use 'then' to mean at that time. Suggestion: use 'needed' and 'then' to match past narrative.

× No, but I think eco friendly scooter are more popular than bikes in our generation.

✓ No, but I think eco-friendly scooters are more popular than bikes in our generation.

There are multiple issues: 'eco friendly' needs a hyphen as a compound modifier 'eco-friendly'; 'scooter' should be plural 'scooters' to agree with the plural verb and 'are'; subject-verb agreement and plurality require plural noun form. Also add a hyphen for correct adjective form. Suggestion: make the noun plural and hyphenate the adjective.

× Young people prefers to ride uh, an electric scooter to school.

✓ Young people prefer to ride, uh, electric scooters to school.

'Young people' is plural, so the verb should be 'prefer' not 'prefers' (third person singular error). Also make the object plural 'electric scooters' to match the plural subject. Remove the article 'an' when referring generally to plural people. Suggestion: use plural verb and plural noun for general statements about groups.