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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I do not have a bike when I was a child, but my friend has one.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I do think that bikes are popular in my country because we have roads here that are very bike friendly and people are using it as a mode of transportation since. Our hometown has a lot of bike lanes.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and naturalness: use past simple consistently and make the answer concise with a clear topic sentence. Add a brief supporting detail or reason. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or went with friends who rode their bikes. As a result, I learned to be independent early on.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and use linking words. Correct tense and remove awkward phrasing. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. This is because many cities have bike-friendly roads and extensive bike lanes, so people often use bicycles for short commutes and errands. Consequently, cycling is becoming a common and convenient mode of transport in urban areas.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I do not have a bike when I was a child, but my friend has one.

I did not have a bike when I was a child, but my friend had one.

Mixed tense error: the clause 'when I was a child' is past time, so the verb should be past tense. Also maintain parallel tense in the second clause: 'my friend had one.' Use 'did not have' for negative past instead of 'do not have.' Suggestion: Use past simple for events in the past and keep verbs in the same time frame.

Present tense issue

× I do think that bikes are popular in my country because we have roads here that are very bike friendly and people are using it as a mode of transportation since.

I do think that bikes are popular in my country because we have roads here that are very bike-friendly and people have been using them as a mode of transportation for a long time.

Multiple issues: 'do think' is acceptable but 'people are using it' is awkward and incorrect reference: 'people' is plural so use 'them' for bikes (pronoun agreement) and 'bike-friendly' needs a hyphen; the present perfect progressive 'have been using' fits because usage started in the past and continues now. The word 'since' was used without a reference point; replace with 'for a long time' or 'for many years' or provide a specific time. Suggestion: Use present perfect continuous to show ongoing action and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Our hometown has a lot of bike lanes.

Our hometown has a lot of bike lanes.

This sentence is correct grammatically. It uses the preposition 'has' appropriately and 'a lot of' correctly modifies plural noun 'bike lanes.' No change needed.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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