Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases (e.g., "you know"). Also correct tense/word order errors (e.g., "I didn't have a bike" is fine, but avoid "I didn't also have the chance").

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents couldn’t afford one, so it wasn't a priority, and I never learned to ride. However, I would like to learn now because it’s a practical and healthy way to travel.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then use clear, specific supporting reasons with linking words. Remove hesitations ("umm") and avoid unfinished phrases. Provide at least one concrete example or comparison (e.g., distances, city vs countryside).

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most people prefer cars for long distances and public transport in cities, and many choose to walk for short trips. In rural areas biking is more common, but overall cars remain the main choice.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child and I didn't also have the chance to get one because it was it wasn't a priority for my parents.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, and I also didn't have the chance to get one because it wasn't a priority for my parents.

This sentence has coordination and word order problems. The phrase 'I didn't also have' is awkward; 'I also didn't have' places the adverb 'also' correctly before the auxiliary verb. Additionally, remove the redundant 'it was' to avoid repetition. Use a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' to join the two independent clauses.

× So because of that, I have not learned how to ride a bike, but I wish to, you know, learn how to ride a bike.

✓ Because of that, I haven't learned how to ride a bike, but I would like to learn.

The original mixes tenses and repeats the phrase 'learn how to ride a bike.' Use the contraction 'haven't' for natural speech and 'would like to' as a more appropriate and concise expression of desire. Avoid repetition by removing the second instance of the phrase.

× I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because nowadays umm people prefer to travel by car or use the public transportation or if they don't, if they do not use the public transportation, they prefer walking or to go to different.

✓ I don't think bicycles are popular in my country because nowadays people prefer to travel by car or use public transportation, and if they don't use public transportation, they prefer walking or going to different places.

Multiple issues: 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is slightly more formal; 'the public transportation' should be 'public transportation' (no article). The clause 'if they don't, if they do not use the public transportation' is repetitive—choose one form. The phrase 'prefer walking or to go to different' is ungrammatical; use parallel gerunds ('walking or going') and add the object 'places' to complete the idea. Ensure consistent present tense and parallel structure.