Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I had a small bicycle when I was about 10.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bike is obviously very popular in my country. From children to elders, people usually ride bags to shopping or travel. It is good for our health.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答直接、自然,但可以更丰富一些细节以提升得分。例如说明你骑车的频率、和谁一起骑、或对你童年影响。注意保持句子不超过5句并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small bicycle when I was about 10, and I rode it almost every day after school. I often cycled with my friends around the neighborhood, which helped me become more confident and fit. Those rides are some of my happiest childhood memories.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 答案有观点但存在语法和用词错误,且表达不够具体。将单数复数和搭配修正(例如 'bikes are','ride bikes or use them for shopping or short trips'),并补充具体例子或原因,用连词连接句子以增强连贯性。保持句子数在5句以内。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities and small towns. Many people use them for short trips, like going to the market or commuting to work, because they are cheap and convenient. Also, cycling is considered healthy and environmentally friendly, so its popularity keeps growing.
× Yes, I think bike is obviously very popular in my country.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are obviously very popular in my country.
句子中“bike”指代一般的“自行车”这一类事物,应使用复数“bikes”或冠词“the bike”。原句缺少复数形式导致数一致错误。建议把可数名词复数化或加定冠词:"bikes are..."或"the bike is..."。
× From children to elders, people usually ride bags to shopping or travel.
✓ From children to elders, people usually ride bikes to go shopping or travel.
原句中有两个问题:1) 用词错误“ride bags”应为“ride bikes”(骑自行车);2) 介词和动词搭配错误,“to shopping”应为动词不定式结构“to go shopping”或使用动名词“for shopping”。因此改为“ride bikes to go shopping”能正确表达“骑自行车去购物”。