Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep answers concise and accurate, use correct verb tenses, avoid repetition and fillers, and add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then give one specific memory and a reason why it mattered. Also correct pronunciation/word choice errors (e.g., ‘I had a bicycle’, ‘it was a great experience’, ‘surprised’ → ‘surprised’ or better ‘sad’ if intended).

Ví dụ: I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. Because of that bike I learned to be independent and it made me very happy, especially when I finally learned to ride without training wheels.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., ‘because’, ‘for example’, ‘also’). Avoid repeating the same idea and improve grammatical agreement (e.g., ‘they are budget-friendly’). Be concise and use more precise vocabulary like ‘affordable’, ‘convenient’, ‘common in cities’ or ‘environmentally friendly’.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, so many people use them instead of cars. For example, in cities people often cycle to work or school because it is faster in traffic and cheaper than driving.

× Yes, definitely. I have one bicycle when I was a child, uh, my parents bought it for me and it was very good experience for me.

✓ Yes, definitely. I had a bicycle when I was a child; my parents bought it for me and it was a very good experience for me.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' while describing a past situation 'when I was a child', so tense is inconsistent. Change 'have' to past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Also add the article 'a' before 'very good experience' and combine clauses with a semicolon or period for clarity. Suggestion: maintain past tense throughout when talking about past events.

× And whenever I ride it, I feel over the moon and it also uplift my my mood whenever I feel surping.

✓ And whenever I rode it, I felt over the moon, and it also uplifted my mood when I felt surpised.

The context is past tense, so present simple 'ride' and present 'feel' are incorrect; use past simple 'rode' and 'felt'. 'Uplift' should be in past form 'uplifted'. 'My my' is a repetition error. 'Surping' is a misspelling of 'surprised'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent (past simple) and correct spelling and repetition errors.

× In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country because it is also budget friendly and people and it is easy access for the people to ride the bike instead of cars and it is also budget friendly for all to buy the bikes because that's why the bikes are very popular in my.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country because they are budget-friendly and easy for people to use instead of cars, so many people can afford to buy them.

Several errors: 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use plural pronoun 'they' (subject-verb agreement and pronoun use). 'Budget friendly' should be hyphenated as 'budget-friendly' and used with plural verb 'are'. 'Easy access for the people to ride the bike' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'easy for people to use'. Avoid repeating 'budget friendly'. The final fragment 'in my' is incomplete; replace with 'in my country'. Suggestion: use consistent plural forms, correct pronouns, hyphenate compound adjectives, and simplify to avoid repetition.