Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Uh, I remember that my grandfather bought me a bike. So yeah, at that time I'm so happy.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think yes, but umm, maybe some, umm, the poor can't buy bike for their children, yeah?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、流畅并包含主题句与具体细节。避免填充词(如 uh, umm),并把时态统一为过去式。可以在第一句直接肯定并给出简短背景,再用一两句描述感受或回忆细节,例如骑车的场景或学会骑车的经历。注意句子不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My grandfather bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. I remember feeling very proud because I could finally cycle without training wheels, and I spent every afternoon practicing with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更明确并提供具体原因或例子,避免犹豫词与随意结尾(like 'yeah?')。先给出直接回答,然后用一到两句具体说明普及程度和原因(例如城市/农村差异、经济因素或环保意识)。保持语言简洁并使用合适词汇表达对比。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular overall, especially in cities where people use them for short commutes. However, their popularity varies by region and income: in wealthier urban areas people often cycle for convenience or fitness, while in poorer or remote areas some families cannot afford them.
× So yeah, at that time I'm so happy.
✓ So yeah, at that time I was so happy.
该句描述过去发生的事情(“at that time”),应使用一般过去时。原句使用现在时“I'm”时态与时间状语不一致。建议把动词改为过去式“was”以保持时态一致。
× I think yes, but umm, maybe some, umm, the poor can't buy bike for their children, yeah?
✓ I think yes, but maybe some poor people can't buy bikes for their children.
原句中存在几个问题:1) 使用了不完整的量词结构“maybe some, umm, the poor”应明确为“some poor people”;2) 名词“bike”在此指泛指复数应使用复数“bikes”;3) 句子口语填充词过多,影响通顺。建议将句子改为“I think yes, but maybe some poor people can't buy bikes for their children.”(我认为是,但也许有些穷人买不起自行车给他们的孩子)。