Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, but now a child my father taught me how to bike a bicycle. My bicycle have more car have many colour such as pink colour and blue colour. In my free time I will ride a bicycle in a park.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think bike is popular in my country because my country is Malaysia. Malaysia is a tropical country so that Viking is not a first chosen to the humour and the most.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Focus on clear, grammatical sentences and relevance. Start with a direct topic sentence (yes/no), then give two specific supporting details (who taught you, what the bike looked like, when/where you rode it). Use correct verb tenses and simple linking words (and, so, because, also). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences to be natural and effective.
Ví dụ: Yes. My father taught me how to ride a bicycle when I was a child, and I remember enjoying it a lot. The bike had bright pink and blue details, which made it easy to spot. I often rode it in the local park after school, usually for about an hour.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give clear, specific reasons using correct vocabulary and linking words. State whether bikes are popular, then explain with two reasons (climate, infrastructure, culture) and a brief example or prediction. Avoid unclear words and grammar errors.
Ví dụ: Not really. In Malaysia, cycling is less popular because the hot, humid climate makes long rides uncomfortable and many cities lack safe bike lanes. As a result, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel, although cycling is becoming more common for leisure on weekends.
× Yes, but now a child my father taught me how to bike a bicycle.
✓ Yes, when I was a child my father taught me how to ride a bicycle.
Errors: incorrect time expression and word choice ('now a child' should be 'when I was a child'); verb choice ('bike' used as verb is informal—use 'ride a bicycle'); word order and missing subject tense consistency. Suggestion: place the time phrase correctly at the beginning or after the subject ('When I was a child, my father taught me...'), use 'ride a bicycle' for clarity and formality.
× My bicycle have more car have many colour such as pink colour and blue colour.
✓ My bicycle has many colors, such as pink and blue.
Errors: subject-verb agreement ('bicycle have' should be 'bicycle has'); redundant and wrong nouns ('car' is incorrect in context); uncountable/plural form for 'color' in this context should be 'colors'; repetition of 'colour'. Suggestion: use correct verb form for singular subject ('has'), remove unrelated words ('car'), use plural 'colors' and list colors simply ('such as pink and blue').
× In my free time I will ride a bicycle in a park.
✓ In my free time I ride my bicycle in the park.
Errors: inappropriate future tense 'will ride' for habitual action; missing article and possessive ('a park' -> 'the park' or 'my bicycle'). Suggestion: use present simple for routines ('I ride') and include 'my' or 'the' depending on meaning ('my bicycle' if it's yours, 'the park' for a specific park).
× No, I don't think bike is popular in my country because my country is Malaysia.
✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because my country is Malaysia.
Errors: article/number issue and subject-verb agreement ('bike is' should be 'bikes are' when speaking generally); repetitive phrase 'my country is Malaysia' is grammatically okay but can be shortened. Suggestion: use plural noun 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' for general statements ('Bikes are not popular').
× Malaysia is a tropical country so that Viking is not a first chosen to the humour and the most.
✓ Malaysia is a tropical country, so cycling is not the first choice for most people.
Errors: incorrect word 'Viking' likely meant 'cycling'; awkward phrase 'not a first chosen to the humour and the most' is ungrammatical and unclear. Suggestion: use 'cycling' for the activity and idiomatic phrasing 'not the first choice for most people' to convey meaning; include a comma before 'so' when connecting clauses.