Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a surviving pink bite with a small tail on a handlebar and I love riding it around the neighborhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bike are quite popular in my country. They are especially common in rural areas where I can see children and older people riding bicycle because they are affordable and practical. However, in big cities many people prefer motorbike or public transport due to a longer distance and traffic.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, chính xác về từ vựng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sửa lỗi phát âm/viết (ví dụ "surviving pink bite" không rõ nghĩa — có thể muốn nói "shiny pink bike"), dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp đơn giản và giới hạn độ dài tối đa 5 câu. Có thể bổ sung thời điểm, cảm xúc hoặc một kỷ niệm ngắn để cụ thể hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a shiny pink bike with a small tassel on the handlebars, and I loved riding it around the neighbourhood. I remember racing my friends every afternoon, which made me feel very free and happy.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời logic nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc (ví dụ số nhiều: "bikes"; danh từ số ít/ nhiều: "a bicycle" vs "bicycles"). Dùng liên từ để nối ý mượt hơn và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh ngắn để làm câu trả lời cụ thể hơn. Hạn chế lặp từ và điều chỉnh thì nếu cần.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas where people use them for short trips. They are affordable and practical for children and older adults, so you often see whole families cycling together. In contrast, people in big cities usually choose motorbikes or public transport because distances are longer and traffic is heavy.
× It was a surviving pink bite with a small tail on a handlebar and I love riding it around the neighborhood.
✓ It was a bright pink bike with a small bell on the handlebar and I loved riding it around the neighborhood.
The sentence mixes past and present tense. The context is past (when I was a child), so verbs should be past tense: 'love' should be 'loved'. Also 'surviving pink bite' appears to be incorrect word choices/typos: 'bright pink bike' and 'small bell on the handlebar' are likely intended. Use consistent past tense and correct nouns to convey meaning clearly.
× Yes, bike are quite popular in my country.
✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.
The subject 'bike' is singular but the sentence refers to bikes in general, so it should be plural 'bikes'. Ensure the subject and verb agree: 'bikes are'.
× They are especially common in rural areas where I can see children and older people riding bicycle because they are affordable and practical.
✓ They are especially common in rural areas where I can see children and older people riding bicycles because they are affordable and practical.
The noun 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' because it refers to multiple people riding them. Use plural form when referring to a general group to match the plural subject.
× However, in big cities many people prefer motorbike or public transport due to a longer distance and traffic.
✓ However, in big cities many people prefer motorbikes or public transport due to longer distances and traffic.
'Motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'many people'. 'A longer distance' is awkward when speaking generally; use 'longer distances'. This corrects noun number and makes the comparison general rather than singular.