Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Correct tenses (past simple) and possessive/age expressions are important. Keep your answer to no more than five sentences and avoid unclear phrases like “I have much respect.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about ten, and it made getting to school much easier. Because it was faster than walking, I could leave home later and still arrive on time.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar for general statements (e.g., “bikes are popular,” “students often ride them”). Avoid unclear fragments like “write read on back.” Mention 1–2 concrete reasons (cost, convenience, environment).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students ride them to school because they are cheap and convenient, and they help avoid traffic during rush hour.

× Yeah, I have much respect.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student used 'have much respect' which does not answer whether they had a bike; the question asked about past possession. Use past tense 'did' to match the question 'Did you have...'. Also 'much respect' is unrelated. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× At my 10 years old, it's convenient for me to go to school, so I started to learn it before I go to school.

✓ When I was 10 years old, it was convenient for me to get to school, so I started learning to ride it before I went to school.

Multiple issues: use 'When I was 10 years old' (age expression) not 'At my 10 years old' (quantifier/article error). Tense consistency requires past tense 'it was convenient' and 'so I started learning' (verb + -ing) and 'before I went to school' (past tense). 'Learn it' is unclear; use 'learn to ride it' or 'learn riding' -> 'started learning to ride it.' Suggestion: keep past tense throughout and use correct age expression.

× Yes and there are popular in my country and most students will choose and write read on back to school is very convenient and not need people and it's cheap.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country. Most students choose them because they are convenient for going back to school, do not require other people, and are cheap.

Original sentence has many errors: 'there are popular' mixes 'there is/are' with an adjective; use subject 'bicycles are popular' (subject-verb agreement). 'Most students will choose and write read on back to school' is ungrammatical—likely meant 'choose them for going back to school.' Use appropriate verb 'choose' with object 'them' (pronoun). 'Is very convenient' should agree with plural subject or be rephrased to 'because they are convenient.' 'Not need people' should be 'do not require other people' or 'do not require assistance.' Maintain consistent tense (present simple for general facts). Suggestion: simplify into clear sentences: 'Bicycles are popular... Most students choose them because they are convenient, don't require others, and are cheap.'