Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I used to have a bar when I have child because, umm, my, my home is a far is far away with my school and I also like to you you, you don't buy to go to school. Uh.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Is a very popular in my country because umm my country is also a uh developing country and many children like uh go to schools bye bye to communicate with.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về ý chính, dùng thì đúng (past simple hoặc used to), tránh lặp và từ sai (ví dụ "bar" -> "bike"). Nên có câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tiếp theo là 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ (lý do hoặc kỷ niệm) với liên từ hợp lý. Tránh tiếng ồn như "umm" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "when I have child" -> "when I was a child".
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it every day because my home was far from school, so cycling was the quickest way to get there.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Cần mở đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp và chính xác (Yes/No + lý do). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thiếu chủ ngữ, động từ) và từ không phù hợp ("bye bye to communicate"). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể: ai dùng xe đạp, ở đâu, vì sao (chi phí, giao thông). Dùng liên từ như "because", "for example" để mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many students and workers use bicycles to travel short distances in cities and towns.
× I used to have a bar when I have child because, umm, my, my home is a far is far away with my school and I also like to you you, you don't buy to go to school. Uh.
✓ I used to have a bike when I was a child because my home was far from my school, and I also didn't like to walk to school.
The sentence contains multiple grammatical issues: wrong noun 'bar' should be 'bike'; tense and pronoun errors 'when I have child' should be 'when I was a child' (past tense and pronoun); awkward expressions 'my home is a far is far away with my school' should be 'my home was far from my school' (preposition and word order); 'I also like to you you, you don't buy to go to school' intended meaning is negative past preference so use 'I also didn't like to walk to school'. Suggestions: replace incorrect words with correct nouns ('bike'), use past tense consistently ('was'), use correct preposition 'far from', and express dislike with 'didn't like to + verb' or 'didn't want to walk'. Keep clauses simple and avoid repetition.
× Is a very popular in my country because umm my country is also a uh developing country and many children like uh go to schools bye bye to communicate with.
✓ They are very popular in my country because my country is a developing country and many children like to go to school by bike.
Errors identified: missing subject 'It/They' and incorrect verb agreement 'Is a very popular' should be 'They are very popular' to agree with plural 'bikes' implied; redundant article 'a' removed; 'go to schools' should be 'go to school' (common expression) and word order 'bye bye to communicate with' is incorrect—intended phrase is 'by bike'. Suggestions: start with an explicit subject ('They' or 'Bikes'), ensure verb agrees in number ('are'), use 'go to school' for general activity, and use the correct preposition 'by' with 'bike' to express means of transport. Also keep sentence concise.