Mirrors— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Reduce fillers (like, actually) and correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., “look at myself,” “well dressed” → “well dressed” or “neatly dressed,” “nothing in my face” → “nothing on my face”). Use a linking word if you add a reason (for example, “because”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually check myself in the mirror before I leave the house because I want to make sure my clothes are neat and there’s nothing on my face.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then one or two clear supporting details. Fix vocabulary (mirror, portable, decorative) and tense usage. Avoid long, unclear phrases and repetition. Use linking words (for example, “for example,” “such as”) to list types.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I buy mirrors sometimes because there are many styles to choose from, such as small portable mirrors for makeup and large decorative mirrors for the living room.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct common errors: say “portable mirror,” “in my bag,” “every time,” and avoid hesitation. Provide one clear reason. Keep to two sentences max.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually carry a small portable mirror in my bag so I can check my makeup and make sure nothing is on my face.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion followed by a specific reason or example. Use correct words (mirrors, designers or styles) and avoid repetition (“nowadays”). If mentioning effects, be specific (make a room look bigger, reflect light).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Mirrors can be great for decoration because they reflect light and make a room appear larger; for example, a large wall mirror can brighten a small living room.

× So like I enjoy looking myself in the mirror actually and I always look at the mirror before I go out because I want to ensure that everything was good and I have like well dressed and nothing in my face.

✓ So I enjoy looking at myself in the mirror, and I always look in the mirror before I go out because I want to ensure that everything is good, that I am well dressed, and that there is nothing on my face.

The sentence misuses pronouns and some verb forms. 'Looking myself' should be 'looking at myself' (preposition + pronoun), and 'look at the mirror' is more naturally 'look in the mirror'. 'Everything was good' should be present tense 'everything is good' to match habitual action. 'I have like well dressed' is incorrect: use 'I am well dressed' (adjective with be). 'Nothing in my face' should be 'nothing on my face' (correct preposition). Also improve clarity by adding 'that' clauses. Suggestions: use 'look at/ in the mirror' correctly, keep tense consistent for habitual actions, use 'be' with adjectives, and use correct prepositions with body parts.

× Yes, I did like I love support some Miller actually because they have like in that day, they have many different style of Miller like portable Miller, like a big Miller for decoration in your house all like for mirror for makeup as well. So there are.

✓ Yes, I have. I actually like some mirror brands because they offer many different styles, such as portable mirrors, large decorative mirrors for the house, and small mirrors for makeup.

This sentence has multiple structure and vocabulary errors. 'Yes, I did' is acceptable but 'Yes, I have' fits the question 'Have you ever bought mirrors?'. 'I love support some Miller' is unclear; corrected to 'I actually like some mirror brands' to convey preference. 'In that day' is unnecessary and incorrect; removed. Use 'offer' instead of 'have' for product availability. Plural 'mirror' was misused; use 'mirrors' or 'mirror types'. 'So there are' is incomplete and removed. Suggestions: answer with a clear auxiliary for present perfect questions ('I have'), use correct nouns and pluralization, and list examples with commas and 'such as'.

× Yes I do I have like one small Miller, I mean like potable Miller with my back every times I go out because I want to make sure that my makeup is OK and nothing into might umm face as well.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a small portable mirror in my bag every time I go out because I want to make sure that my makeup is OK and that there is nothing on my face.

Pronoun and article errors and word choice: 'like one small Miller' should be 'a small portable mirror' (correct article and adjective order). 'Potable' is incorrect spelling; use 'portable'. 'With my back' is incorrect; 'in my bag' is intended. 'Every times' should be 'every time' (singular). 'Nothing into might umm face' is garbled; correct to 'nothing on my face'. Also add 'that' to introduce the clause for clarity. Suggestions: use correct articles ('a'), correct word order (adjective before noun), correct spelling, and proper prepositions for possession/storage ('in my bag'). Keep 'every time' singular for repeated occasions.

× MMM yes I put I believe that Millers can help you with decoration with your room as well because nowadays we have many types of dealers and the design is quite modern nowadays. Also the change with difference from like 2.

✓ Yes, I believe that mirrors can help decorate your room because there are many styles and modern designs available today. They also create visual changes, such as making a room look larger.

Multiple issues: 'I put I believe' is incorrect; use 'I believe'. 'Millers' should be 'mirrors' (spelling). 'Help you with decoration with your room' is awkward; use 'help decorate your room'. 'Many types of dealers' is unclear; 'many styles and modern designs' is clearer. Remove redundant 'nowadays'. The final fragment 'Also the change with difference from like 2' is incomplete and unclear; I interpreted it to mean mirrors can change perception, e.g., making a room look larger. Suggestions: use clear verbs ('believe'), correct spelling ('mirrors'), avoid redundancy, and complete thoughts with examples (e.g., 'make a room look larger').