Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise, correct grammatical errors, and include a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and irrelevant phrases like “long drink.”

Ví dụ: It depends on the day. Sometimes I remember my dreams clearly, but other times I wake up exhausted after a nightmare and can’t recall any details. For instance, last week I woke up very stressed but could not remember what caused the nightmare.

Gợi ý: Organize the response with a clear main sentence and use linking words to connect supporting details. Correct tense and sentence fragments, and be more specific about frequency and an example of how your boyfriend helps.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often share my dreams with my boyfriend. For example, if I have a nightmare he usually listens and helps me calm down by talking it through or making tea. Because my dreams are often intense, sharing them helps me feel supported.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear position and use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “mental exhaustion”). Provide a specific reason and an example with a linking phrase like “for example” or “because.”

Ví dụ: I don’t think dreams have special mystical meanings; instead, I think they reflect our mental state. For example, when I am very stressed I tend to have nightmares, but after a relaxing holiday I usually have pleasant dreams.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer, then explain briefly with one or two specific reasons. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce redundancy. Use linking words such as “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t want to make my dreams come true because most of my dreams are nightmares. For instance, I sometimes dream of being chased by a snake or trapped in an elevator, which I definitely would not want to experience in real life.

× It it depends on the day.

✓ It depends on the day.

There is an extra repeated word 'it'. Remove the duplicate so the sentence reads 'It depends on the day.' This fixes a simple repetition error and produces a grammatically correct clause.

× Sometimes I do remember the dreams that I had, but there were days that I was having a long drink or even nightmares but when I woke up, I woke up.

✓ Sometimes I do remember the dreams that I had, but there were days when I had long dreams or even nightmares and when I woke up,

The original mixes progressive past ('was having') with awkward phrasing 'long drink' (likely intended 'long dream') and repeats 'woke up'. Use simple past for completed past events: 'there were days when I had long dreams or nightmares, and when I woke up...'. This keeps tense consistent and corrects word choice.

× I woke up exhausted and stressed but remember nothing about the dream.

✓ I woke up exhausted and stressed but remembered nothing about the dream.

The sentence mixes past ('woke up') with present ('remember'). For consistency use past tense 'remembered' to match 'woke up'.

× Yes, I do share my dreams with my boyfriend.

✓ Yes, I share my dreams with my boyfriend.

Using 'do' is unnecessary for simple present affirmative sentences. While not strictly incorrect, removing 'do' makes the sentence more natural: 'I share my dreams with my boyfriend.'

× Every night I have a nightmare or even sweet dreams.

✓ Every night I have nightmares or sometimes sweet dreams.

Use plural 'nightmares' for habitual occurrences and add 'sometimes' to contrast 'sweet dreams'. This maintains correct plurality and natural adverb placement.

× I always tell my boyfriend what it is about and sometimes if I'm having a really stressed day because of my dreams.

✓ I always tell my boyfriend what my dreams are about, especially if I'm having a really stressful day because of them.

The original is fragmented and uses 'stressed' (an adjective describing a person) where 'stressful' (describing a day) fits. Also replace 'what it is about' with 'what my dreams are about' and connect the clause to avoid a fragment.

× My dreams can be very intense sometimes so he would always make me feel relaxed after I wake up.

✓ My dreams can be very intense sometimes, so he always helps me relax after I wake up.

'Would always make me feel' is awkward in this context; use 'always helps me relax' for habitual present. This aligns tense and improves natural phrasing.

× I don't think dreams have any special meanings, but I do believe that it's related to our mental exhaust exhaustion.

✓ I don't think dreams have any special meanings, but I do believe they are related to our mental exhaustion.

'It's' is vague; use 'they are' to refer to dreams. 'Mental exhaust' is incorrect word formation; use the noun 'exhaustion'. This corrects pronoun reference and word form.

× For example, when I'm really stressed I always get nightmares and when I when I feel relaxed I mostly get sweet dreams.

✓ For example, when I'm really stressed I always get nightmares, and when I feel relaxed I mostly get sweet dreams.

Remove the duplicated 'when I'. Maintain present tense consistency. Add a comma before 'and' to separate the two clauses.

× No because I'm the type of person that always have nightmares and weird dreams and only 10% of my dreams are like good and sweet so I do not want to make my dreams come true because I don't want to get chased by a snake or get stuck in elevator.

✓ No, because I'm the type of person who always has nightmares and weird dreams; only about 10% of my dreams are pleasant, so I don't want my dreams to come true — I don't want to be chased by a snake or get stuck in an elevator.

Multiple issues: use 'who' for people not 'that', correct subject-verb agreement 'person who always has' (singular), use 'pleasant' instead of awkward 'like good and sweet', add 'about' before '10%', and article 'an elevator'. Also restructure sentence with punctuation for clarity and parallelism ('be chased' and 'get stuck').