Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác. Tránh câu quá dài và cấu trúc sai (ví dụ: “I have a little recollection of my dream is…” không đúng). Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nói thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ công việc bạn muốn làm, lý do). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản khi cần kết nối ý, giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams. One recurring dream is that I work as a translator helping people communicate in different languages. I enjoy learning new words and improving my language skills, which is why this dream feels so important to me.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời chưa trực tiếp và ngữ pháp sai (thời thì và cụm từ không phù hợp: “each other” không đúng). Trả lời cần nêu rõ hiện tại bạn có chia sẻ hay không, kèm lý do ngắn gọn. Dùng 1–2 câu, dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I usually don’t share my dreams with others, even with my best friend. I prefer to keep them private because they feel personal and I worry people might not take them seriously.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tốt: trực tiếp, có ý chính và ví dụ minh họa. Để hoàn thiện hơn, bạn có thể dùng một liên từ để nối các câu và thêm cụ thể ví dụ về một giấc mơ cụ thể. Giữ độ dài 2–3 câu để tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I truly believe dreams can have special meanings and affect our emotions. For instance, after a positive dream about finishing a project, I felt inspired and motivated to work harder the next day.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng bị lộn thời và dùng từ không phù hợp ("Has come true?" và "I didn't mean to make my dreams come true"). Nên trả lời trực tiếp ở hiện tại và nói rõ bạn có đang nỗ lực ra sao. Dùng 2–3 câu, nêu hành động cụ thể bạn đang làm để đạt được ước mơ.

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I want to make my dreams come true because they give me a sense of purpose and happiness. I am working steadily towards them by setting small, realistic goals and improving my language skills every week.

× Yes, of course, I have a little recollection of my dream is I want to become a translator that helps people and comprehend new words and new language and I also want to promote my language skill.

✓ Yes, of course. I have a vague recollection of my dream: I wanted to become a translator who helps people, learns new words and languages, and improves my language skills.

The original sentence contains multiple clauses joined incorrectly and mixes tenses and forms, causing a run-on sentence and unclear meaning. Use a colon to introduce the dream, change 'is' (incorrect linking) to rephrase the clause, use 'who' for people (relative pronoun for persons), parallel verbs ('helps', 'learns', 'improves'), and plural 'skills'. Also change 'a little recollection' to 'a vague recollection' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: break complex ideas into shorter clauses, maintain parallel verb forms, and keep tense consistent.

× To be honest, I didn't share my dream with each other even though my best friend.

✓ To be honest, I didn't share my dream with anyone, not even my best friend.

'Each other' is used for mutual actions between two or more people and is incorrect here. The clause 'even though my best friend' is ungrammatical; 'not even my best friend' correctly expresses exception. Use 'anyone' to indicate others in general. Suggestion: use 'each other' only for reciprocal actions and use 'anyone' or 'anybody' when referring to people in general.

× Has come true? Yes, absolutely.

✓ Has it come true? Yes, absolutely.

The question 'Has come true?' lacks a subject; auxiliary 'has' requires a subject before the past participle. Adding 'it' forms the correct present perfect question. Suggestion: ensure subject and auxiliary are present in perfect tenses: 'Has it come true?'.

× I didn't mean to make my dreams come true because achieving them would give me a sense of purpose and happiness, and I'm working steadily towards them by setting small goals.

✓ I do intend to make my dreams come true because achieving them will give me a sense of purpose and happiness, and I'm working steadily towards them by setting small goals.

The original 'I didn't mean to make my dreams come true' contradicts context and uses incorrect past negation. The speaker intends present/future actions, so use present 'do intend' or simple present 'I intend' and future 'will give' to show expected outcome. Maintain consistency with 'I'm working' (present continuous). Suggestion: match tense to meaning—use present/future when talking about current intentions and expected results.