Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence saying where you went, then add one or two specific supporting details (who you went with, what you did) using simple linking words. Avoid grammatical errors (tense, articles, word order) and odd phrases like “a lot of stuff which is salty and handmade in house.”

Ví dụ: I spent my last holiday at Blue Lake Park, which is near my house. I went there with my family and we enjoyed a picnic, walked around the lake and bought homemade salty snacks from a nearby stall.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer (Yes or No) and give specific reasons. Use linking words such as because and so to connect ideas. Correct awkward phrases like “I fly off sleep” and simplify to “I can sleep longer.” Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy holidays because they help me relax and recover from a busy week. For example, I can sleep longer in the mornings and spend more time with my family.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the holiday and then add specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions. Mention concrete traditions or activities that make it special (lights, family visits, food). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: My favourite public holiday is Diwali. I like it because our family celebrates for several days with lights, sweets and visiting relatives, which makes it a joyful time.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and include a couple of specific activities. Use correct tense and natural phrases like “catch up on sleep” and “not wake up early.” Link ideas with words like and or so. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ví dụ: On holidays I usually relax and catch up on sleep. I stay in bed later in the morning and sometimes read a book or watch a movie.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear yes/no and two specific reasons. Fix pronouns and sentence structure. Use linking words like because and so. Avoid unnecessary repetition and broken sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer spending a day at home because I feel more relaxed there and I don’t have to deal with tiring travel. For example, driving to places on the weekend makes me feel stressed, so I enjoy staying in.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference (leisurely) and explain why with specific examples. Use simple, correct vocabulary and avoid invented words. Keep to two sentences and use linking words like because or so. Mention activities you do on a leisurely holiday.

Ví dụ: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it helps me relax and finish small chores at my own pace. For example, I might cook a nice meal, do a little gardening and read a book instead of watching TV all day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give distinct reasons. Use correct comparative and avoid repeating the word “peace” unnecessarily. Add a concrete example of a peaceful holiday activity. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer a peaceful holiday because it reduces stress and helps me recharge. For instance, I enjoy staying at a quiet guesthouse near the countryside and taking long walks.

× I didn't go for last holiday on the lake blue park that is near my house.

✓ I didn't go to the Blue Lake park near my house for the last holiday.

The original sentence has word order and preposition errors. Use past tense negative 'didn't go' with the infinitive 'to' (not 'for'). Place the location 'the Blue Lake park' before the time phrase 'for the last holiday'. Capitalize proper name 'Blue Lake'. Improve clarity by removing unnecessary words.

× I enjoy it a lot with my family.

✓ I enjoyed it a lot with my family.

The surrounding context is past (last holiday), so the verb should be in the past tense 'enjoyed' to match time frame. Using present tense 'enjoy' creates a tense mismatch.

× I spend my weekend there with a lot of stuff which is salty and handmade in house.

✓ I spent my weekend there and bought many snacks that were salty and homemade.

Tense should be past 'spent' to match previous sentence. 'A lot of stuff' is vague; 'many snacks' is clearer. Use 'that were salty and homemade' to describe the snacks. 'In house' is incorrect preposition and form; use 'homemade' or 'made at home'.

× As I like holidays because in the holidays I feel relaxed and comfortable and I fly off sleep for long in the morning due to the hectic schedule in the weekdays.

✓ I like holidays because during them I feel relaxed and comfortable, and I can sleep longer in the morning due to the hectic schedule on weekdays.

Use present simple 'I like' for general preference. Replace 'in the holidays' with 'during them' or 'on holidays'. 'Fly off sleep' is incorrect; use 'sleep longer' or 'sleep in'. Use 'on weekdays' (not 'in the weekdays'). Maintain parallel structure and clarity.

× Diwali is a public holiday like the best because in the Diwali there is a long little like about one week holiday for the UMM festival in which there are two 3 festivals includes.

✓ Diwali is my favorite public holiday because there is usually about a one-week holiday for the festival, which includes two or three celebrations.

Remove awkward filler words like 'like the best' and use 'my favorite'. Do not use 'in the Diwali'; use 'for the festival' or 'during Diwali'. 'Long little like about one week' is contradictory; simplify to 'about a one-week holiday'. 'Two 3 festivals includes' should be 'includes two or three celebrations' with correct word order and number expression.

× I do on the holidays relax myself and complete the sleep which I have actually scheduled in the weekdays and relax in the morning, not wake up early in the morning.

✓ On holidays I relax and catch up on the sleep I missed during the weekdays; I relax in the morning and do not wake up early.

Use natural phrasing: 'On holidays I relax' rather than 'I do on the holidays relax myself'. 'Complete the sleep' is unnatural; use 'catch up on the sleep I missed'. Avoid redundant phrases 'in the morning' repeated. Ensure verbs are in correct forms and sequence.

× As I like to spend my day at home because I know whom I feel relaxed as compared to go outside we I feel tired.

✓ I like to spend my days at home because I feel more relaxed there compared to going outside, where I feel tired.

Replace incorrect pronoun 'whom' with proper structure. Use 'spend my days' (plural) for habitual action. Use 'compared to going outside' (gerund) and 'where I feel tired' to refer back to going outside. Fix word order and clarity.

× With the drive a car I felt too tired and hectic 'cause on the weekends.

✓ Driving a car makes me feel too tired and stressed on weekends.

Correct the structure: use gerund 'Driving a car' as subject. 'Felt too tired and hectic' is incorrect; use 'tired and stressed'. Place time phrase 'on weekends' at end for clarity.

× To go for the work. That's the problem.

✓ Having to commute for work is the problem.

Original is a fragmented sentence. Combine ideas into a single sentence: 'Having to commute for work is the problem.' This clarifies that commuting causes the tiredness.

× I prefer lizard Lyon the day, not abyssio because lazarly felt me or relax and I do my household work when I get the time, not the PCI sit on the couch and watch the TV for the whole day.

✓ I prefer a lazy day rather than a busy one because I feel relaxed and can do household tasks when I have time, not just sit on the couch and watch TV all day.

Many words are misspelled or wrong ('lizard Lyon', 'abyssio', 'lazarly', 'PCI'). Replace with 'lazy day' and 'busy one'. Use 'feel relaxed' (adjective) and 'do household tasks' (noun). Use 'have time' and 'sit on the couch and watch TV all day' for clarity.

× That pleasure level day I prefer.

✓ I prefer that kind of relaxing day.

Original is ungrammatical. Use 'that kind of relaxing day' to express preference. Maintain present simple 'I prefer' for habitual preference.

× I prefer a peaceful holiday because in the peaceful holiday I felt peace as compared to existing holiday.

✓ I prefer a peaceful holiday because I feel peaceful there compared to an exciting holiday.

Maintain present tense 'I prefer' and 'I feel'. Use 'during a peaceful holiday' or 'there' instead of 'in the peaceful holiday'. 'Felt' should be 'feel' to match present preference. 'Existing holiday' is incorrect; replace with 'an exciting holiday'.