工作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
I work as a beauty consultant at Akinic. I give advice and take care of silent. I also hear silent true treatment.
考官
Where do you work?>
考生
I work at a beauty clinic in Bangkok near Megabanga is quite popular for ilist virtually and sucking Katie men.
考官
Is it a good place to work?
考生
Yes, I think it could have to work. The environment is friendly and the clinic had good facility like a canteen, meeting room and even a nap room.
考官
Would you like the place where you work?
考生
Yes, I really like it. The environment is nice and my colleagues are fairly hot. It's called to public transportation and shop so it's very convenient. It's only about a 5 minute walk.
考官
What are your future work plans?
考生
In the future, I plan to open my own small skin care business because I am really interested in beauty and skin care.
评估
总分
语法
× I give advice and take care of silent.
✓ I give advice and take care of clients.
The original uses 'silent' which is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'clients'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammatical form, but it affects the present participle context 'take care of'. Use the noun 'clients' after 'take care of'. Replace incorrect word and keep verb phrase intact.
× I also hear silent true treatment.
✓ I also hear about clients' treatment plans.
'Hear silent true treatment' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is that the speaker listens to or discusses clients' treatment plans. Use 'hear about' or 'listen to' plus a clear noun phrase. This fixes incorrect word forms and word order.
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