聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be careful with grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and concise phrasing. Replace vague phrases and avoid repetition. Connect ideas with a linking word if needed.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend. We often talk about life and our studies, which makes me feel refreshed and supported because we share advice and laugh together.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Use correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and linking words to organise ideas. Avoid trailing off; finish your thought with a concrete detail.

示例: I usually talk about everyday life and our studies. Since we are in the same faculty, we discuss course assignments and exam preparation, and we sometimes share stories about our families.

建议: Answer directly and concisely. Use correct expressions (e.g. "one friend" or "one-on-one") and avoid hesitations. If you sometimes join groups, explain when and why with a linking phrase.

示例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I am quite introverted and feel more comfortable in private conversations. However, I join group discussions when we need to work on a class project.

建议: Give a clear preference and explain with specific reasons. Use natural phrases (e.g. "more comfortable," "better for understanding") and avoid conflicting or unclear statements. Keep it to two or three sentences.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more comfortable and allows better understanding through body language. I find social media useful for quick messages, but it lacks the personal touch of meeting in person.

建议: Be concise and use correct grammar. State when arguments happen and how you resolve them using linking words like "when" and "so." Provide a specific result to show maturity in handling disagreements.

示例: Yes, we sometimes argue when we have different opinions on a topic. I listen to their views and explain mine calmly, and as a result we usually reach a compromise or a better solution.

× I enjoying and I feel so refreshing when I talked with my friends.

✓ I enjoy it and I feel very refreshed when I talk with my friends.

The original uses 'enjoying' incorrectly; after subject 'I' we need the base form 'enjoy' for present simple. 'Refreshing' is an adjective but 'feel refreshed' is the correct collocation. Also tense should be present simple 'talk' to match habitual action. Improve by using 'I enjoy' + object 'it' and 'feel refreshed' to express the effect.

× I usually chat about life and my study.

✓ I usually chat about life and my studies.

'Study' as a noun meaning subjects or academic work is usually plural 'studies' in this context. Use present simple 'chat' is correct for habitual action; just change 'study' to 'studies' for correct noun form.

× Since we have same faculty, we have to discuss in many topics and related our course and we also talked about our family and.

✓ Since we are in the same faculty, we have to discuss many topics related to our course, and we also talk about our families.

Use 'are in the same faculty' rather than 'have same faculty'. 'Discuss' does not need 'in' before 'many topics'. 'Related to' is the correct preposition for linking topics to a course. 'Talked' should be present simple 'talk' to match habitual actions, and 'family' should be plural 'families' for different people. Also remove dangling 'and' at the end.

× I prefer to chat with my only one friend because I am so introvert.

✓ I prefer to chat with my one and only friend because I am very introverted.

'Only one friend' is awkward; 'one and only friend' or 'only my one friend' is clearer. 'Introvert' is a noun; as an adjective use 'introverted'. Use 'very' for emphasis rather than 'so' in formal correction.

× I don't want to see or anythings or everythings to, uh, to many peoples.

✓ I don't want to see many people or be around crowds.

Original contains incorrect pronouns and plural forms: 'anythings', 'everythings', 'peoples' are incorrect. Use 'many people' for plural. Rephrase to a natural expression 'be around crowds' to convey the idea.

× Uh, sometimes it, it depends if we had to group, uh, discussions, of course I will do neither. I will.

✓ Sometimes it depends; if we have group discussions, of course I will participate.

The original is disfluent and ungrammatical. Use 'depends' (present) for habitual possibility. 'Had to group discussions' is wrong; use 'have group discussions'. 'I will do neither' is incorrect and unclear; likely the student means they will participate, so 'I will participate' is clearer.

× I must prefer to communicate face to face because it offers more good decisions and comfortable.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more comfortable and leads to better decisions.

'Must prefer' is incorrect modal use; simply 'prefer' is appropriate. 'More good decisions' should be 'better decisions'. 'Comfortable' needs 'more comfortable' or 'is more comfortable'. Rearranged for natural English.

× If I talked in social media it's it is not casual.

✓ If I talk on social media, it is not casual.

Use present simple 'talk' for a general situation, not past 'talked'. Use preposition 'on social media'. Remove duplicated 'it is'.

× It it will be non casual if I talked with my friends beside him and we can.

✓ It would not be casual if I talked with my friends next to him, and we could...

Use conditional 'would' for hypothetical. 'Non casual' is unnatural; use 'not casual'. 'Beside him' is better phrased 'next to him'. Sentence ends incomplete; 'we could...' needs completion depending on intended meaning. Use consistent tense (conditional) for hypothetical situations.

× Yes, I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions upon one topics.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about one topic.

Use present simple 'argue' for habitual action is fine. 'Upon' is formal and unusual here; 'about' is better. 'One topics' is wrong number agreement; use singular 'one topic' or 'a topic'.

× I listen to them and I also talked my views.

✓ I listen to them and I also explain my views.

Mix of present 'listen' and past 'talked' is inconsistent. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'explain my views' or 'share my views'. 'Talked my views' is ungrammatical; use 'explained' (past) or 'explain' (present).

× I and we we then we started umm discussing and and get some positive result from.

✓ Then we start discussing and get some positive results from it.

Original has repeated pronouns and fillers and wrong tense. Use 'we start discussing' or 'we then started discussing' consistently. 'Get some positive results' plural is natural, and add 'from it' or specify 'from the discussion'. Remove filler words.