旅行— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
考生
Yes, of course I love sightseeing, uh, the beautiful view outside the window when I traveling by bus or car, umm and I also love uh, look at the people, uh, doing in something in daily life.
考官
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
考生
I am a big fan of taking photograph, so, uh, if I travel by car and I catch the beautiful view outside the window, I usually take a photo and then, uh, upload in my story of Instagram to share with the my, uh, close friend.
考官
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
考生
Uh, I think I would say love the mountain uh, more than because, umm, I love, enjoy sightseeing, uh, in the natural view, yeah, of mountains. And I love the activities like, uh, trekking to uh, boost my energy.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
分数: 66.0建议: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn hơn; tránh các tiếng lắp (uh, umm) và lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'when I traveling' → 'when I travel'). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng từ nối đơn giản để câu mạch lạc (for example, and).
示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by car or bus because I like seeing natural scenery and everyday life. For example, I often watch people going about their routines or trees and fields passing by.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
分数: 64.0建议: Giảm tiếng lắp và sửa ngữ pháp (taking photograph → taking photographs; I catch → I see; upload in my story → upload it to my Instagram story). Nên nêu ý chính trước rồi giải thích ngắn gọn cùng một ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ tối đa 3 câu.
示例: Yes, I often take photos of scenery from the car. If I see a beautiful view, I take a picture and usually upload it to my Instagram story to share with close friends.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
分数: 68.0建议: Trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn rồi nêu lý do cụ thể; loại bỏ tiếng lắp và sửa trật tự từ (I would say I love the mountains more). Thêm ví dụ về hoạt động mong muốn để cụ thể hoá câu trả lời. Giữ trong 2–3 câu.
示例: I prefer the mountains. I enjoy the natural scenery and activities like trekking, which help me relax and boost my energy.
语法
× Yes, of course I love sightseeing, uh, the beautiful view outside the window when I traveling by bus or car, umm and I also love uh, look at the people, uh, doing in something in daily life.
✓ Yes, of course I love sightseeing and looking at the beautiful view outside the window when I travel by bus or car, and I also like watching people doing things in daily life.
Error type: Verb in the present participle form and Verb form errors. 'when I traveling' is missing the auxiliary and should be 'when I travel' (simple present for habitual action). 'love uh, look at' mixes base verb with 'love' - use gerund 'looking' after verbs of liking. 'look at the people, uh, doing in something' is awkward: use 'watching people doing things'. Suggestions: Use 'travel' for habitual present; after 'love' use gerund ('loving' is rare) or 'love + noun/gerund'; use 'watch' or 'watching' and 'doing things' for natural phrasing.
× I am a big fan of taking photograph, so, uh, if I travel by car and I catch the beautiful view outside the window, I usually take a photo and then, uh, upload in my story of Instagram to share with the my, uh, close friend.
✓ I am a big fan of taking photographs, so if I travel by car and see a beautiful view outside the window, I usually take a photo and then upload it to my Instagram story to share with my close friends.
Error type: Incorrect use of quantifiers/article and pluralization. 'taking photograph' should be plural 'taking photographs' or 'taking a photograph'. 'catch the beautiful view' is unnatural; use 'see a beautiful view'. 'upload in my story of Instagram' should be 'upload it to my Instagram story'. 'share with the my, uh, close friend' has extra article and singular/plural mismatch; use 'my close friends' or 'my close friend'. Suggestions: Use plural for general activities ('photographs'), correct preposition 'to' for uploading to a platform, include object 'it' for 'upload it', and remove extra 'the' before 'my'.
× Uh, I think I would say love the mountain uh, more than because, umm, I love, enjoy sightseeing, uh, in the natural view, yeah, of mountains.
✓ Uh, I think I would say I love the mountains more because I enjoy sightseeing in natural mountain scenery.
Error type: Present tense and sentence structure issues. 'I would say love the mountain' lacks subject 'I' before 'love' and 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. 'more than because' is redundant and incorrect. 'I love, enjoy sightseeing' is awkward; use a single verb 'I enjoy sightseeing'. Suggestions: Include the subject with verbs, use plural for general preferences ('mountains'), and simplify structure to 'I love the mountains more because I enjoy sightseeing...'.
× And I love the activities like, uh, trekking to uh, boost my energy.
✓ And I love activities like trekking to boost my energy.
Error type: Verb + -ing form and structure. 'like, uh, trekking to uh, boost my energy' is acceptable but extra fillers disrupt flow. Use 'activities like trekking' (gerund after 'like') and 'to boost my energy' is correct as purpose. Suggestions: Remove fillers and keep gerund form for activities ('trekking').
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