视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases. Expand once with a specific reason or a brief example using linking words. Aim for 2–3 sentences and make emotions clear (e.g., excited, nervous) rather than saying both without explanation.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I find photography helps me improve my composition skills, and I often feel excited but a little nervous when I try new subjects because I want to get the best shot.

建议: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, then support it with specific reasons and use linking words for coherence. Correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'countryside views' and 'relaxed and unwound'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer countryside views to urban ones. For example, I like photographing mountains and lakes because their peaceful atmosphere helps me relax and unwind, which in turn improves my focus when framing shots.

建议: Answer directly and avoid hesitation sounds. Provide a clear reason and a specific example with complete phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and finish the sentence meaningfully (e.g., describe what is different about each mountain). Avoid place names that may be unclear unless you can describe them.

示例: I prefer views in Thailand, especially the mountainous regions. For instance, each mountain has a unique color and vegetation, so I enjoy photographing the varied textures and light at sunrise.

× Moreover, I always really likes and afraid when I take different kind of views.

✓ Moreover, I am always really nervous and afraid when I take pictures of different kinds of views.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'likes' does not agree with subject 'I' (subject-verb agreement -> Grammar Problem Type ID 27) and is inappropriate with 'I' in this context; 'afraid' needs a linking verb (be) to form a correct predicate (There is a sentence structure problem -> Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' to match plural noun 'views' (singular/plural issue -> Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Also 'take different kind of views' is unclear; use 'take pictures of different kinds of views'. Suggestion: use 'I am always really nervous and afraid' to use correct verb 'am' and correct adjective form and plural noun form.

× Personally I prefer UMM countryside views because I love UMM taking photos of landscape areas such as mountains and lake because I always feel relaxed and unwind after.

✓ Personally I prefer countryside views because I love taking photos of landscapes such as mountains and lakes; I always feel relaxed and unwind afterwards.

Several pluralization errors: 'landscape areas' can be 'landscapes' (more natural) and 'lake' should be plural 'lakes' to match 'mountains' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'UMM' fillers should be removed or replaced with natural pauses. 'Unwind after' is incomplete; use 'unwind afterwards' or 'unwind afterwards' to indicate after taking photos. Also sentence structure is long and needs punctuation (sentence structure issue -> ID 26).

× Personally I prefer UMM countryside views because I love UMM taking photos of landscape areas such as mountains and lake because I always feel relaxed and unwind after.

✓ Personally I prefer countryside views because I love taking photos of landscapes such as mountains and lakes; I always feel relaxed and unwind afterwards.

'Unwind after' is missing an object or adverb; correct form is 'unwind afterwards' or 'relaxed afterwards' (preposition/adverb use -> Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Also 'taking photos of landscape areas' is acceptable but 'of landscapes' is more natural.

× As I live in Thailand, I would say I prefer views in Thailand, particularly in the mountainous areas such as Tianmei and Tianglai as I always feel impressed by how umm. Each mountain show different kind of.

✓ As I live in Thailand, I would say I prefer views in Thailand, particularly in mountainous areas such as Tianmei and Tianglai, because I am always impressed by how each mountain shows different kinds of scenery.

The original has sentence fragments and incomplete clauses (sentence structure errors -> Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'Each mountain show' has subject-verb agreement error; should be 'each mountain shows' (subject-verb agreement -> ID 27). 'Different kind of' should be 'different kinds of' to agree in number (singular/plural issue -> ID 1). Also 'umm.' is a filler and was removed; 'impressed by how' must be completed with a noun phrase such as 'different kinds of scenery'.

× Each mountain show different kind of.

✓ Each mountain shows a different kind of scenery.

The verb 'show' does not agree with the singular subject 'each mountain' and must be 'shows' (third person singular -> Grammar Problem Type ID 2). 'Different kind of' is incomplete and should be 'a different kind of scenery' or 'different kinds of scenery' depending on meaning (singular/plural issue -> ID 1).