视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh) and grammar errors like "to taking". Keep it under 5 sentences.

示例: No, I don't really enjoy taking pictures of different views. I find photography time-consuming and I prefer experiencing a scene directly rather than photographing it. For example, when I travel I usually focus on exploring places instead of stopping to take photos.

建议: Ask for clarification briefly if you didn't hear the question, then answer directly. Use a short polite phrase to request repetition and then give an opinion with one reason. Avoid long hesitations.

示例: Could you repeat that, please? If you mean whether I prefer urban or rural views, I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more scenic, and I enjoy nature walks and open landscapes.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific condition or example. Use correct grammar ("depends on" not "depends to"). Give one or two supporting details or an example to make your answer concrete.

示例: It depends on the place. I usually prefer views in other countries when they offer unique landscapes or historical architecture, but I also appreciate beautiful scenery in my own country because it's familiar and often less crowded.

× No, actually not. Also I don't like to take a picture and uh, I don't want to taking pictures of different waves too.

✓ No, actually not. Also I don't like taking pictures, and I don't want to take pictures of different views either.

Error type: Verb + -ing form and word choice. The verb patterns are incorrect: 'like to take a picture' is acceptable but more natural here is 'like taking pictures' for general preference; 'I don't want to taking' is ungrammatical because after 'want' the base form (infinitive without to) or 'to' + base form is required: 'want to take'. Also 'waves' seems to be a wrong word for 'views'; context indicates 'views'. Suggestion: use 'like taking pictures' for habits and 'I don't want to take pictures' for desire, and replace 'waves' with 'views'.

× I don't understand, uh is the question.

✓ I don't understand the question.

Error type: Sentence structure and redundancy. The original has an unnecessary filler 'uh' and incorrect word order 'uh is the question.' The correct, natural structure is 'I don't understand the question.' Suggestion: remove filler words and keep standard subject-verb-object order.

× Uh, it depends to where we are taking the picture and, uh.

✓ Uh, it depends on where we are taking the picture.

Error type: Incorrect use of prepositions. The correct preposition with 'depends' is 'on', not 'to': say 'depends on'. Also 'we are taking the picture' is acceptable; remove the trailing filler 'and, uh.' Suggestion: use 'depends on' and avoid unnecessary fillers for clarity.