视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct verb forms (take/taking), and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Keep to under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of scenic views because they help me preserve memories and share my travels on social media. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain vistas to show my followers the places I visit and to inspire them to travel.

建议: Answer directly, correct grammar and word choice, and use linking words for clarity. State preference in one sentence, then add a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and vague phrases like 'good vibe' or 'positive bias'—use precise vocabulary (peaceful, tranquil, inspiring).

示例: I prefer rural views because the countryside, farms and rolling hills look more peaceful and inspiring. For instance, I like photographing small villages at dawn because the soft light and quiet atmosphere create striking images.

建议: Give a clear, direct response (e.g., 'I prefer other countries' or 'It depends') and then explain why with specific details. Reduce hesitation and repetition; use linking words (however, because) to connect ideas and give a concrete example.

示例: It depends, but I usually prefer photographing views in other countries because they offer new and diverse scenes. For example, when I visit foreign cities I enjoy capturing unique architecture and street life that I can't find at home, which makes my photos more interesting.

× I love to taking the pictures of different breathtaking views because, uh, I can, uh, keep those as a memory and, uh, would like to share those kinds of pictures on my social media to attract more individuals because I really wanted to become my influencer and uh, when I'm traveling, I love to taking the pictures of different views.

✓ I love taking pictures of different breathtaking views because I can keep them as memories and would like to share these kinds of pictures on my social media to attract more people because I really want to become an influencer, and when I'm traveling, I love taking pictures of different views.

The form 'to taking' is incorrect; after verbs like 'love' and 'would' use either the gerund ('taking') or the infinitive ('to take') consistently. Also some noun and article choices were adjusted ('the pictures' -> 'pictures', 'a memory' -> 'memories', 'individuals' -> 'people'), and tense consistency ('wanted' -> 'want'). Suggestion: use 'love taking' and 'I really want' for present habitual actions and simplify noun phrases.

× I prefer to taking the views from the rural area because of the farm and the sometimes the hills area giving me a good vibe and I really wanted to take the pictures of that view and a rural area gives me a peace and positive bias which always motivate to keep the keep those memories in.

✓ I prefer taking views in rural areas because farms and sometimes hilly areas give me a good vibe, and I really want to take pictures of those views. A rural area gives me peace and a positive feeling, which always motivates me to keep those memories.

Again 'prefer to taking' is incorrect; use 'prefer taking' or 'prefer to take'. Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'hills area giving me' should be 'hilly areas give me' and 'wanted' -> 'want' for present preference. 'Positive bias' is awkward; 'positive feeling' is clearer. Also missing subject in 'motivate to keep' needs 'motivates me to keep'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'prefer', ensure subject-verb agreement, and include explicit subject for passive-like clauses.

× It depends where I am at that time. Uh, well, umm, most of, most of the, from your experience, I, I think I prefer to take the pictures from the, uh, different cities and from the different countries.

✓ It depends on where I am at the time. From my experience, I think I prefer to take pictures in different cities and different countries.

'Depends where I am at that time' is missing the preposition 'on' -> 'depends on where...'. Redundant fillers and repetition were removed. Use 'from my experience' not 'from your experience' when referring to the speaker. Also use 'take pictures in' rather than 'take the pictures from'. Suggestion: include necessary prepositions ('depends on'), avoid unnecessary repetitions, and choose correct possessive reference.

× When I'm around traveling to another cities, the different views gives me a more, umm, calmness and the peaceful energy to, uh, capture the.

✓ When I'm traveling to other cities, the different views give me more calmness and peaceful energy to capture them.

'Around traveling to another cities' is ungrammatical; use 'traveling to other cities'. Subject-verb agreement: 'views gives' -> 'views give'. 'A more calmness' incorrect article and comparative; use 'more calmness' or better 'a greater sense of calm'. Also sentence ended abruptly; added object 'them' referring to views. Suggestion: simplify phrase to 'when I'm traveling to other cities' and ensure subject-verb agreement and complete object.