自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using correct tense and give a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and avoid grammar mistakes. For example, say whether you had one and add one reason or memory in one or two short sentences. Keep it natural and concise.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city so my parents preferred I walk or use public transport for safety.

建议: Use clear subject-verb agreement, correct vocabulary and structure. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and workers ride bikes to save money and avoid traffic, especially in smaller towns.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student used the present tense 'don't have', which is incorrect. Use the past simple negative 'didn't (have)' to match the past-time reference. Suggestion: replace present simple negative with past simple negative: 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, I think he's a popular in my country because many many people or many man's or boys use it in rods and used to warm Togo and and.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular in my country because many people, men, and boys use them on the roads, and they are used for getting around.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect pronoun 'he' for 'bikes' (should be 'they'), extra article 'a' before 'popular', unclear and incorrect phrases ('many man's or boys', 'use it in rods', 'used to warm Togo'), and overall ungrammatical structure. Corrections: use correct plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement), remove the article before 'popular', use 'people, men, and boys' for clarity, use plural object 'them' and correct noun 'roads', and rephrase 'used to warm Togo' to a coherent idea such as 'used for getting around' unless a specific meaning is intended. Suggestions: simplify and clearly state the idea in correct grammar and word choice.