自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve accuracy and naturalness: correct word choice and grammar, be more concise, and include a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, replace incorrect words like “scripts” with the intended word (e.g., “scrapes” or “mischief”), fix verb forms, and avoid repetition (“that is the reason why”).

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought I was too rowdy and often got into scrapes. Consequently, they preferred to keep me at home, so I only learned to ride much later when I was more mature.

建议: Focus on grammar, word choice and specificity: use correct plural forms and subject-verb agreement, choose precise vocabulary (e.g., “bike lanes” or “rental stations” instead of “racing stations”), and add one concrete statistic or clear comparison if possible. Use linking words to improve coherence (e.g., “for example,” “also,” “moreover”).

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and help commuters avoid traffic. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school and work, and there are lots of bike lanes and rental stations in cities, so I often see bicyclists on major roads.

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my parents thought I was too rowdy and often got into scripts, so they preferred keeping me safe at home.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my parents thought I was too rowdy and often got into scrapes, so they preferred to keep me safe at home.

The original sentence uses 'got into scripts', which is incorrect; the intended word is 'scrapes' (meaning minor trouble). Also, 'preferred keeping me safe' is not the most natural form here: after 'prefer' when referring to a past habitual choice, use 'preferred to keep' or 'preferred keeping' is possible but 'preferred to keep' is clearer. Suggestion: replace 'got into scripts' with 'got into scrapes' and use 'preferred to keep me safe at home' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I think bike are very popular in my country because they are cheap and helps to avoid traffic.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and help to avoid traffic.

'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'are very popular'. Also 'helps' is incorrect because its subject is 'they' (bikes), so the verb should be plural 'help'. Ensure subject and noun number agree: use 'bikes... help'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× For example, many students and office workers ride the bike to school and work, and there are many racing stations around the cities, so I often see people riding the bike on the road.

✓ For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to school and work, and there are many parking stations around the cities, so I often see people riding bikes on the road.

'ride the bike' is awkward when speaking generally; use plural 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'. 'Racing stations' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'parking stations' or 'bike racks/stations'. I corrected to 'parking stations' to indicate bike parking locations. Also change the second 'riding the bike' to 'riding bikes' for consistency and correct general reference. Grammar problem type ID:22